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A Personal Observation
by Deborah Ann Tornillo
Saturday, October 15, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.

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A Personal Observation

Sitting in a sad place

A room unbalanced.

Strangers stare off in space

Little hope left on their face.

Exchanging glances

Some attempting smiles.

Few have the light

Shining in their eyes.

Even their loved ones

Desperately trying to cope

Fear of the unknown

At the Cancer Center for Hope.

Deborah Ann Tornillo

Deborah Tornillo

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Reviewed by Gisele Vincent-Page	11/3/2011

Despite the pain that these words denote, you've managed to arrange them into a quiet and respectful rhyme. Good writing.




Reviewed by TONY NERONE	10/15/2011

But they have the love of JESUS to guide them. I missed resding You my Dear Friend. GOD BLESS YOU Tony

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