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If A Promise Lasts Forever
by Skye Carter

Tuesday, January 19, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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So, this is a rough pretty much and I kinda just got inspired, so let's see how this ends up.

I'll always be there,
if you're darkest hour.
When the mascara runs down your cheek.
I promise.

When you fall,
I'll pick you up,
and whip the sand off your jeans.
I promise.

When he calls in the night,
and tells you goodbye,
I'll hold you up.
I promise.

When I yell and I scream,
it'll be for you're own good.
But I'll never stop loving you.
I promise.

I'll let you take my hand,
my heart, and my soul.
I'll give you my everything.
Just promise, not to break it.

I promise that I won't run away.
I promise I'll be yours,

Because that's what I said,
I would so from the start.

If a promise lasts forever,
then I'll have no problem keeping it.

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Reviewed by Michelle Mead 1/22/2010
I think this is really good. Your choice of descriptions is really unique and of things some might not think of, like the mascara. I like that-they aren't trite or fake. You put alot of heart in this, and that's evident. Blessings, Michelle xx
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