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I Once Was A Victim
by Joan Huffman
Thursday, August 06, 2009
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Poets Online: In Response to July 2009 Prompt: This Was Once a Love Poem by Jane Hirschfield


I Once Was A Victim

Once a battered girl,
beaten with beatitudes and a belt,
trodden like thyme between hard rocks.

Once a bludgeoned wife,
threatened with words and weapons,
branded like chattel upon bruised flanks.

Once a bashful student,
filled with humility and hope,
infused like vodka over fleshy fruits.

Education, errors, and experience;
trials, time, and finally trust.

Then a blossoming woman,
sweetened with kisses and caresses,
softened like chocolate in hot hands.

Now a burgeoning surgeon,
endowed with power and pride,
hardened like steel in fiery forges.

And no longer victim: now cherished lover,
empathic caregiver and truth-speaker.

Joan Huffman 08/02/2009

 


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Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 8/8/2009
Strong use of alliteration and consonance throughout, Joan! And the strength of this woman is quite evident ... so satisfying! ~Elizabeth
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/7/2009
Thank you for sharing this most encouraging and empowering write, Joan. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu 8/7/2009
Assertive lines written with original imagery. Lovely tale of a woman's evolution.

Axilea
Reviewed by Lori Moore 8/6/2009
I love the empowerment. Wonderful poetry.


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