Shadows Of A Different Time
by Betty Rickard
Friday, April 25, 2003
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Looking into the past..
Whimsical, patterns of dust that gathered from a time long ago..Shadows, of faces, on the wall from past times, being pulled into future times..
Shadows, that continue on just like many, many years ago..Shadows, that don't notice anything different..
Clicking, of glasses, seeing a couple embrace they walk off somewhere, in a different time and space..
Cherished, memories of hundreds of years gone by...Shadows, still on the walls, frozen somewhere, in time..Perhaps, lost in another dimension..to remain shadows, forever on a wall hundreds and hundreds
of years later...they still remain
~~Shadows ~~ They, still live on ~~~
They, still live on..
XxSuNkiSsx.aol.com a.k.a. Betty Rickard
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April 24, 2003
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|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|lovely shadows that live forever...Well done Betty!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|I think so too. Bravo. Enjoyed this muchly.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|lovely write, betty! :) (((HUGS))) to you, sweetie! :)|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Clicking, of glasses, seeing a couple embrace they walk off somewhere, in a different time and space..
Oh Betty, this is hauntingly romantic. I could write a short story using this stanza alone as inspiration!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|great style, and atmospheric|