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| Reviewed by Debra Baker |
8/26/2008 |
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Ernie
The poem reaps of lust and desire waiting to capture a true slice of the imagination...Take a chance and embrace those thoughts...Lol.
Excellent poetry my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
8/23/2008 |
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Well done my friend, passion and emotions run deep throughout! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
8/21/2008 |
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Your form and word use have convinced me, and I wish you well the object of your objection. Fusion is breath-taking, and it allows contemplation after the reading. Thanks, Oh Master! - Bill
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
8/21/2008 |
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The first sensual piece from you that I've had the opportunity to read. I like how tastefully written this is. You've captured that fantasy/daydream feel and followed it up with realistic speculation. The way you phrase the ending...makes it seem breathless. This style suits you! Enjoyed~
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
8/20/2008 |
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Stunning.......
Doug |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
8/20/2008 |
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Woow I love it so much said and so much
Passion and erotic feelings in just a few words
Beautiful form
Powerful thoughts!
Peace Love and light....Morning star |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
8/20/2008 |
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| I think I'll like the form, as soon as I work it out. At least it works well for your excellent piece. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill |
8/19/2008 |
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A wonderful piece. It took me a moment to figure out the statue, but it's really pretty and I hope to see it in person one day.
Lovely!
R~ |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
8/19/2008 |
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| nice invitation. love this form |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
8/19/2008 |
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| beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
8/18/2008 |
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I love it, thank you for sharing a great write.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
8/18/2008 |
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You already know what I think..) This form could soon become, if not already has,one of my absolute favorites...
As always, M |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
8/18/2008 |
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Really great take on 'Fusion' This looks like an interesting form of writing, must try it out.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/18/2008 |
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YES! =] Exquisitely penned touch of words, Erny, well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Lady Buckeye. |
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