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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
1/1/2008 |
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Paul,
This is a sad, tender piece. What I like best is the realistic feel to your words. Well done!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Ryan |
4/20/2007 |
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If you are like me Paul, you know that when the words come, if you don;t write them down you never quite find them again...even snipets are of value when we get a chance to return to them. This is such a sad song Paul, the kind the music industry craves because it has such a personal ring, one so many can identify with. I think this could easily be put to music...I hear a melody.
Love,
Taylor |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
3/27/2007 |
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| LOVE this Paul.. It would make a great song. Do you have a melody written ? ......m |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/27/2007 |
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I truly enjoyed this Paul!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
3/27/2007 |
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I have enjoyed the reading of a great song... "Please Tell Me" can make the CHARTERS OF THE MUSIC BOARDS.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
3/27/2007 |
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Paul, this is lovely! You write songs? I'm impressed! Again, this is lovely and I wish I could hear the melody that goes along with it.
Love,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/26/2007 |
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| very moving sentiment in these excellent lyrics ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/26/2007 |
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Sing it for us Paul;-)! Excellent and beautiful lyrics!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
3/26/2007 |
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| really cool lyrics, i can almost hear a tune! |
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| Reviewed by Amy Sellers |
3/26/2007 |
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| Paul... BEST WORKS seem to always come in the middle of the night... I'm so glad you got up to save these words! It was well worth it... I really love it and would really like to hear the melody. Congrats on a great inspiration. (Good luck sleeping through the night tonight!) Cheers! Amy S |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
3/26/2007 |
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| (Okay) I'm clapping. Can you see me? I hope so, because I enjoyed this, love holly |
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| Reviewed by J M |
3/26/2007 |
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Paul,
Beautiful I could hear bars maybe not the same but it was beautiful your poems are always sterling to me....
Peace,
josie |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
3/26/2007 |
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Great lyrics my friend...go ahead and hum a few bars...all kidding aside enjoyed this much! Sincere and heartfelt!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/26/2007 |
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Paul,
Beautiful song with thought provoking questions; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
3/26/2007 |
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| great love verse of thought and question Paul, now all u got to do is put some music to it |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
3/26/2007 |
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| Lovely...Hugssssssssssss |
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| Reviewed by Laura Mayer |
3/26/2007 |
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Pretty good Paul! Enjoyed.
Hugs, Laura |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
3/26/2007 |
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| I like this very much, Paul, because of the sincerity of the words and intensity of the voice. The rhythm could fit a number of different musical styles, which just goes to show how universal the sentiments are. A slow ballad or an upbeat hip-hop... Take your pick... I am sure there must be someone musical amongst us who could assist in your composition. It certainly makes one great song. TY and good luck with it. Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
3/26/2007 |
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| Pretty good. You just need to find a simple key board with on board instruments and you can even start by just using finger cords then you can have your own music for it. Lady J |
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