|Reviewed by Helena Quinn
|Beautiful work! I love the rhythm and the rhyming patterns.|
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|I enjoy your poems of Haggard Halls. The flow is good ,andmessage profound......M|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Good Morning Paul,
This Poetic express Is Fluid!! Very Very Smooth To The Read.
Its Beautiful how your words spoke!
|Reviewed by Leann Marshall
|Brings to mind a place torn by battle but as the smoke parts--its very soul remains. Beautiful writing.|
|Reviewed by Debra Baker
|Paul, your pen is captivating, and the work magnificent. Not a flaw in your penmanship. Let me personally say, I think you are a brilliant Poet.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Yes, the Board has said it! This is flawlessly constructed and so tight. And the energy within it is immense, like a coiled spring. Excellent, Paul. I particularly like those walls speaking tongue-in-cheek... guess they must be whispering into each other's ears! :)) Bless you, Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|What a profound write indeed my friend...well done a poem penned with perfection.
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
This poem is wonderfully written and should be in the textbooks for perfection in rhyme.
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
I love the renegade tone of part 18! Haggard's Halls has had its way for generations and finally someone is ready to stand up and make some changes. I can't wait to see how this series unfolds in future parts. Excellent work and well worth the wait! Love and Hugs~
|Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
|Very profound and true, I especially like the last verse.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Spiritual words of truth for one to ponder over....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|AWESOME write, Paul!!! Well-said!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Wow! Truly an excellent poem, Paul. You are a fine writer. I wish I could write like this and the message, of course, spot on and classic. ~ Sara|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|This is brilliant,,, Gosh,, wish you wrote more,,,, You are so very talanted,, Much enjoyed.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Splendid poem still one of my favorites Paul,a joy to read!|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
love your choice of words Excellent tempo
However i wish I had read the other seven parts!
Stunning view of thoughts!!
Peace Love and hugssss...Morning Star
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|love the rhythm and flow to your work!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|poem flows effortlessly ...|
|Reviewed by Kathy Kopp
|Paul, I haven't read the first 7 parts yet, but I like this one. Good personification.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Powerful thoughts Paul and perfect rhyme and flow.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Beautiful rhythm...beautiful rhyme...beautiful verse.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Very, very well done Paul. I like your style my friend. Be well and God bless.|
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|You are a wonderful poet. Your style is superb.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Wonderful writing sweet man,enjoyed very much..stay safe and well...Hugssssss|