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When You Wish Upon A Star!
by Paul Berube
Thursday, July 24, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Please don't ask me where this one came from. Perhaps it's an age thing. (lol)




Once upon a starlit night,
'Twas purely fantasy.
On a steed of snowy white,
she looked most perfectly.

Inching forward on her mount,
who stood his ground with pride ;
She beckoned me upon its back
and took me for a ride.

Now, I'm not one to challenge dreams,
as everybody knows;
But how could I reject this scene,
the woman wore no clothes.

Against lifes better judgement
and movement of the horse,
wrapped my arms around her waist,
for safeties sake, of course.

Through many clouds, around each star,
to heavens gates we flew;
Taking each upon his back,
to realms we never knew.

Upon the Rings of Saturn
she turned and kissed my lips.
Then slowly guided both my hands
to touch her lovely hips.

She used me just to fill her needs.
I felt much like a fool.
For what pride does a man not have,
if it isn't for his tool.

Then again, the ride was nice,
In dreams one's sure to roam;
But like the little lady says,
" there is no place like home."

 

 

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Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 6/17/2012
This is a beautiful fantasy. What would live be without them?

Jane Noponen Perinacci
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 9/24/2009
Wow! What a fantasy! Loved the lyrical flow...fun to read! Thanks.

Anna
Reviewed by Richard Orey 2/9/2009
A masterpiece of lyrical tintinabulation with wonderful cadence and metric rhythm. This is a fabulous poem to read outloud.

I love your truthful humor:
"For what pride does a man not have,
if it isn't for his tool."

A terrific write, Paul!
Richard
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 11/16/2008
Love the last line and coun't agree with you more. Holly
Reviewed by miss choos 10/30/2008
I didn't realise you had written so much poetry.
I like it too.
Reviewed by Jerry Engler 9/19/2008
This is a clever, fanciful write--very enjoyable. Don't forget to put the tool away when you climb off that horse....Jerry
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 9/4/2008
A good dreamy write.
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 8/25/2008
This was a very cheery and relaxing piece to read. Thank you for sharing.

May The Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/18/2008
Giddy up, cowboy. Nicely done. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 8/8/2008
What a clever story Paul!
I love the beat and flow to this!
YOU must have woken up wanting to ride!
Glad you were home lol and Thank you for the smiles...
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful SHEExooo

STay Positive! It's been awhile that I've been here, so I will get my Paulie fix ~ Let r' rip...
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 8/5/2008
nothting wrong with a little fantasy Paul, you ventured there in verse also
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 8/4/2008
Paul, I've always thought that flying dreams were remarkable experiences, but to add a touch of sensuousness and heat--wow what a ride that must have been. Fun poem to read and well penned.
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 8/2/2008
This was such fun to read...I need some cheery thoughts today. Thank you for stopping by my page and for your comments. God Bless You, Melissa
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 7/29/2008
Beautiful writing sweet man..stay safe and well...Hugs
Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller 7/29/2008
This is great and if its an age thing, I should be having a blast.
Seriously, I found myself smiling a bit of a Cheshire smile.
You convey the feeling of a bit of confusion adding to the dreamlike state.

Really enjoyed this piece of work.

--RaeLynn
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 7/28/2008
...out of a novel,,, this is very beautiful,,, to dream dreams is a delight.
Love, Christine
Reviewed by Janice Beaty Hamilton 7/28/2008
What a neat poem... I so enjoyed this... Blessings, Janice
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 7/28/2008
Never to old! I loved this. Thanks for the smile this afternoon.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 7/27/2008
Power Tools Are Amazing!
ha ha....I enjoyed this shooting star of erotic fantasy
now now now.....is this to be continued?
Perhaps within the galaxy of her nebulas? ;)
Much Love & Inspiration
Embraced ~ Embrassť
Vickie
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 7/26/2008
Hahaha!!!...but I loved this, Paul!!! You are very creative indeed!!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader) 7/25/2008
loved this lil poem, very nice
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/24/2008
I love it and please find out if she has a sister...maybe we can double sometime lol

Fee
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 7/24/2008
Paul,
This poem is so sweet in its fantasy and dream sense. It makes me want to call my better half and beg him to come nearer to me! Dreaming solo is not as fun.

Thanks,
Jill
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 7/24/2008
A most worthy dream of fantasy and delight to fill any warm heart...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 7/24/2008
Paul,
Wow! My eyebrows shot up a few times on this one! Quite the surprise from you - a wonderful surprise, though. This has that enchanted dream feel, and your sense of humor here is both playful and tasteful. I see you've taken a don't-ask-because-I'm-not-telling stance...so I will have to be content to just enjoy. Enjoy I did! Hugs~
Sheila
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 7/24/2008
:))))))))) An AGE thing????? Hopefully we will never be too old or too young for this kind of date, Paul! And needs so delicately met and with such chivalrous charm perhaps makes the "work" seem less odious or manipulative. Your rhyme and meter are flawless... I wonder why?? This rocks lyrically and with great tenderness and beauty. Kate xx
Reviewed by Southern Comfort 7/24/2008
This here was a dad burn goodun! I giggled and smiled from beginning to end! HUGS! SC
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 7/24/2008
lol, this is both humorous and unforgetably lovely....
Reviewed by Ingeborg von Finsterwalde 7/24/2008
Aren't dreams wonderful? To bad we have to wake up, but I am glad you enjoyed the ride:)

Ingeborg
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 7/24/2008
very fun - love the lightness of it-and, anything with a gallant steed--!!
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 7/24/2008
Seemingly effortless flow; I always love reading your poetry. This one was the perfect way to start my day - you've given me a morning smile!
Reviewed by Paul Berube 7/24/2008
A bit of a change for you with this write my friend. An interesting dream to say the least and very well written. Excellent write Paul.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 7/24/2008
Sometimes pride just don't matter do it?? Love the poem Paul.
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