|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|This is a beautiful fantasy. What would live be without them?
Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Wow! What a fantasy! Loved the lyrical flow...fun to read! Thanks.
|Reviewed by Richard Orey
|A masterpiece of lyrical tintinabulation with wonderful cadence and metric rhythm. This is a fabulous poem to read outloud.
I love your truthful humor:
"For what pride does a man not have,
if it isn't for his tool."
A terrific write, Paul!
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Love the last line and coun't agree with you more. Holly|
|Reviewed by miss choos
|I didn't realise you had written so much poetry.
I like it too.
|Reviewed by Jerry Engler
|This is a clever, fanciful write--very enjoyable. Don't forget to put the tool away when you climb off that horse....Jerry|
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|A good dreamy write.|
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|This was a very cheery and relaxing piece to read. Thank you for sharing.
May The Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Giddy up, cowboy. Nicely done. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|What a clever story Paul!
I love the beat and flow to this!
YOU must have woken up wanting to ride!
Glad you were home lol and Thank you for the smiles...
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful SHEExooo
STay Positive! It's been awhile that I've been here, so I will get my Paulie fix ~ Let r' rip...
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|nothting wrong with a little fantasy Paul, you ventured there in verse also|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|Paul, I've always thought that flying dreams were remarkable experiences, but to add a touch of sensuousness and heat--wow what a ride that must have been. Fun poem to read and well penned.|
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|This was such fun to read...I need some cheery thoughts today. Thank you for stopping by my page and for your comments. God Bless You, Melissa|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Beautiful writing sweet man..stay safe and well...Hugs|
|Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
|This is great and if its an age thing, I should be having a blast.
Seriously, I found myself smiling a bit of a Cheshire smile.
You convey the feeling of a bit of confusion adding to the dreamlike state.
Really enjoyed this piece of work.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|...out of a novel,,, this is very beautiful,,, to dream dreams is a delight.
|Reviewed by Janice Beaty Hamilton
|What a neat poem... I so enjoyed this... Blessings, Janice|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Never to old! I loved this. Thanks for the smile this afternoon.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Power Tools Are Amazing!
ha ha....I enjoyed this shooting star of erotic fantasy
now now now.....is this to be continued?
Perhaps within the galaxy of her nebulas? ;)
Much Love & Inspiration
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Hahaha!!!...but I loved this, Paul!!! You are very creative indeed!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)
|loved this lil poem, very nice|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I love it and please find out if she has a sister...maybe we can double sometime lol
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
This poem is so sweet in its fantasy and dream sense. It makes me want to call my better half and beg him to come nearer to me! Dreaming solo is not as fun.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|A most worthy dream of fantasy and delight to fill any warm heart...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Wow! My eyebrows shot up a few times on this one! Quite the surprise from you - a wonderful surprise, though. This has that enchanted dream feel, and your sense of humor here is both playful and tasteful. I see you've taken a don't-ask-because-I'm-not-telling stance...so I will have to be content to just enjoy. Enjoy I did! Hugs~
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|:))))))))) An AGE thing????? Hopefully we will never be too old or too young for this kind of date, Paul! And needs so delicately met and with such chivalrous charm perhaps makes the "work" seem less odious or manipulative. Your rhyme and meter are flawless... I wonder why?? This rocks lyrically and with great tenderness and beauty. Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|This here was a dad burn goodun! I giggled and smiled from beginning to end! HUGS! SC|
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|lol, this is both humorous and unforgetably lovely....|
|Reviewed by Ingeborg von Finsterwalde
|Aren't dreams wonderful? To bad we have to wake up, but I am glad you enjoyed the ride:)
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|very fun - love the lightness of it-and, anything with a gallant steed--!!|
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Seemingly effortless flow; I always love reading your poetry. This one was the perfect way to start my day - you've given me a morning smile!|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|A bit of a change for you with this write my friend. An interesting dream to say the least and very well written. Excellent write Paul.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Sometimes pride just don't matter do it?? Love the poem Paul.|