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Haggards' Halls ( Part II )
by Paul Berube

Friday, June 13, 2003

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Re-taking the castle

Wills of steel in irons lie,
time has come to live or die.
Keys were forged by some untrue ,
distraction raised with ballyhoo.

Rebellion led in silent stage,
hatred bred from inner rage.
Blood was shed by most in part,
battle won of those with heart.

The castle fell to truth that day,
and righteousness has had its' way.
Throne returned to royalty,
longing naught for dignity.

Price of freedom is very dear,
souls that wander we can hear.
Stains of justice still recalls,
Bless these walls in Haggards' Halls.

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Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten 12/4/2007
"Price of freedom is very dear,
souls that wander we can hear.
Stains of justice still recalls,
Bless these walls in Haggards' Halls"

I love the last verse here!
Excellent flow and rime, Paul Im hooked! :)
Love and Peace

Reviewed by Sheila Roy 11/7/2007
Sounds like a historical place, fraught with passed residents. Loving this. ~Sheila
Reviewed by A PAX 4/5/2004
I bet you have fun writing this!!!
I adore reading it!
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 8/1/2003
Sod those rebels.
Still reading
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 6/21/2003
loving this Paul!!

Thanks, Dani
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 6/20/2003
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) 6/18/2003
Ah waitnig to see who takes the halls next
I love the way you mix adventure with spirit of conquest
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 6/18/2003
I love the medieval feel to these! I am sure I will be telling you all through this serious, how on your rhyme is! You do it with ease and grace!

Reviewed by Linda Hill 6/18/2003
Excellent, my dear friend...
I love this series. I hope
you write more of these!!!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 6/17/2003
Oooooo Paul this is splendid...oh my loss of words here...Geez this series when complete REALLY needs to be published!
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa 6/17/2003
I can feel the souls wandering in the desert of lost worlds...this gets better and better!!!!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 6/16/2003
I love this, Paul! The meter and rhymes were both great.

Sandie Angel / May Lu :o)
Reviewed by serenety L 6/14/2003
Wonderful. Excellent write. Will there be a third part?? S.
Reviewed by The Gentle Man 6/14/2003
Yes! This is coming along very nucely Paul. Enjoyed very much!
Reviewed by Renee Bagley 6/13/2003
Wow I am extremely impressed by this poem! I subscribed to your Ad Site because I love your writings! Great job Paul!!!!
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 6/13/2003
Super read
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/13/2003
Paul, what's happening in Haggards Hall is enhanced by the beauty of your poetry, the stunning rhythm and rhyme, that you capture so effortlessly~
Reviewed by Dale Clark 6/13/2003
Great write and flow in this series.
Reviewed by Christine Morell 6/13/2003
I really enjoyed this 2nd part. Excellent, Paul.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/13/2003
This is outstanding Paul!!
Looking forward to read part 3!!
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 6/13/2003
Great reading!
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 6/13/2003
Wonderful to read...
Love the flow and feel of it...
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 6/13/2003
Love it !!!!!
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 6/13/2003
This adds greatness to the one before it. Will be waiting, ~SH~
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 6/13/2003
A wonderful contiuation of your epic!
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 6/13/2003
Good morning Paul...this just keeps getting better. Excellent write.
Reviewed by g g (Reader) 6/13/2003
Excellent flow!
I love this!!!
Lady G.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 6/13/2003
GM, Paul
Part two was Great too!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 6/13/2003
Really good.
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 6/13/2003
This is wonderful, Paul. I agree with Peggy... please more!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 6/13/2003
War never comes without a cost that you are showing so well through this write.
Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader) 6/13/2003
Bless you, Paul. Haggard's Halls has the flavour of a classic myth! I wish I could read the five parts put on one page..A significant poem!
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 6/13/2003
Paul....This is free flow of rhyme my friend...excellent...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 6/13/2003
Goodmorning Paul.
I love the flow of rhyme in this tale of Haggards Hall's. Please more. It is enchanting to read. {{smiles}} Have a wonderful weekend see you Monday morning.
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