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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
12/4/2007 |
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"Price of freedom is very dear,
souls that wander we can hear.
Stains of justice still recalls,
Bless these walls in Haggards' Halls"
I love the last verse here!
Excellent flow and rime, Paul Im hooked! :)
Love and Peace
Kimmy~
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
11/7/2007 |
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| Sounds like a historical place, fraught with passed residents. Loving this. ~Sheila |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
4/5/2004 |
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I bet you have fun writing this!!!
I adore reading it! |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
8/1/2003 |
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Sod those rebels.
:):)
Still reading
Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
6/21/2003 |
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loving this Paul!!
Thanks, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Rives |
6/20/2003 |
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| Magnifient...bravo!!! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) |
6/18/2003 |
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Ah waitnig to see who takes the halls next
I love the way you mix adventure with spirit of conquest |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
6/18/2003 |
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Paul,
I love the medieval feel to these! I am sure I will be telling you all through this serious, how on your rhyme is! You do it with ease and grace!
Hugs,
Maria |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/18/2003 |
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Excellent, my dear friend...
I love this series. I hope
you write more of these!!!
~~Linda~~ |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
6/17/2003 |
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Oooooo Paul this is splendid...oh my loss of words here...Geez this series when complete REALLY needs to be published!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
6/17/2003 |
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I can feel the souls wandering in the desert of lost worlds...this gets better and better!!!!
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/16/2003 |
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I love this, Paul! The meter and rhymes were both great.
Sandie Angel / May Lu :o)
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| Reviewed by serenety L |
6/14/2003 |
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| Wonderful. Excellent write. Will there be a third part?? S. |
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| Reviewed by The Gentle Man |
6/14/2003 |
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| Yes! This is coming along very nucely Paul. Enjoyed very much! |
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| Reviewed by Renee Bagley |
6/13/2003 |
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| Wow I am extremely impressed by this poem! I subscribed to your Ad Site because I love your writings! Great job Paul!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
6/13/2003 |
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| Super read |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/13/2003 |
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| Paul, what's happening in Haggards Hall is enhanced by the beauty of your poetry, the stunning rhythm and rhyme, that you capture so effortlessly~ |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
6/13/2003 |
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| Great write and flow in this series. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
6/13/2003 |
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I really enjoyed this 2nd part. Excellent, Paul.
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/13/2003 |
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This is outstanding Paul!!
Looking forward to read part 3!!
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
6/13/2003 |
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| Great reading! |
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| Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) |
6/13/2003 |
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Wonderful to read...
Love the flow and feel of it... |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
6/13/2003 |
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| Love it !!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
6/13/2003 |
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| This adds greatness to the one before it. Will be waiting, ~SH~ |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
6/13/2003 |
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| A wonderful contiuation of your epic! |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
6/13/2003 |
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| Good morning Paul...this just keeps getting better. Excellent write. |
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| Reviewed by g g (Reader) |
6/13/2003 |
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Excellent flow!
I love this!!!
Hugs
Lady G. |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
6/13/2003 |
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GM, Paul
Part two was Great too!
tony |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
6/13/2003 |
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| Really good. |
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| Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle |
6/13/2003 |
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This is wonderful, Paul. I agree with Peggy... please more!
Jill |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
6/13/2003 |
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| War never comes without a cost that you are showing so well through this write. |
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| Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi |
6/13/2003 |
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| Bless you, Paul. Haggard's Halls has the flavour of a classic myth! I wish I could read the five parts put on one page..A significant poem! |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
6/13/2003 |
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| Paul....This is free flow of rhyme my friend...excellent...BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
6/13/2003 |
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Goodmorning Paul.
I love the flow of rhyme in this tale of Haggards Hall's. Please more. It is enchanting to read. {{smiles}} Have a wonderful weekend see you Monday morning.
Peg |
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