|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|"Do not burn your lips"...lol! Excellent advice! I enjoyed these poems, Paul. Love and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
|Technically, some of these are senryu. Others are lossely haiku, since dealing with quantums is another qualification from nature poems. Still, well stated takes on, yesterday was today, tomorrow is yet to be, today is the present, so treat it as a gift....
|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
|I'm with Tinka...my favorite lines. Gives one pause.|
|Reviewed by The Gentle Man
|Paul, I enjoyed these very much! Thanks for sharing!|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Splendid Haiku loved it !!!!|
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|..yes to live in the present is an art..it is ,after all God's PRESENT to us!!!
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Good advice poetically expressed Paul. G|
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|I like these, Paul. You make me want to write in form - maybe a tanka . . . perhaps a Lune.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Enjoyed each one!|
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|I love this travel through time! Well done!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Paul, each one a little nugget of wisdom;-) Superb!|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Little gems each one
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Paul......thanks for lovely haikus my friend....excellent!!!!|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Do not burn your lips?! :) Love that image, Paul! Wonderful haikus showing zest and wisdom.|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Very good! Fresh and delightfully wise sayings!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Morning Paul Love these.
Once had been today
The memories of before
Shadows of the past
It is here and now
Make the best of what you have
Live for the moment
A time yet to be
Do not rush the arrival
It may never come "
Happy Labor Day yes long weekend dear friend
enjoy and be blessed
|Reviewed by L M (Reader)
|Paul these are excellent.
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Great little treasures, these are. Happy Holiday, Paul.
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|These are fantastic Paul! Wish I'd written them! :)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love the combination! Great write and have a wonderful weekend!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|And the winner is!!!!!!!
Blow out the candles
Be careful what you wish for
Do not burn your lips
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|You're really great at these Paul...I will try doing one....one day.
I like Today the best......beautiful and wise......ty, Dani
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Paul.. your cleverness is inspiring.. you do ku with gusto.. creative and original. I loved all of it, but lingered at the birthday one.. that last line is a 'show-stopper'.. Happy Labor Day to you as well.. katy.|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Very good Haikus Paul. Enjoyed each one. They contain something that is useful in everyday life. Myself, I was just a little
off kelter this morning. I hate to get that way but it does happen. Thnks for reading my rant. Bill Murray
|Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
|nice grouping. Good hiakus, all of them, and they go togther so well.|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
These are all great! My favorite...
A time yet to be
Do not rush the arrival
It may never come"
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Beautiful haiku's, I liked these so much!
|Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
|thank you for the wishs and passing on all that is great....good write|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wow! These Haikus are wonderfully-written.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|Have a happy Labor Day as well paul! :0)|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Paul.. Happy Labor Day.. Time is a constant.. we must learn to appreciate it.. while we still have it. Excellent write my friend|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|Happy Labor Day to you, as well, Paul. It is amazing how one can express and examine life so subtly, just by writing Haikus. Such wisdom in your words.
|Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
|Sweet!!! Happy Labour Day!|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|...and a Happy Labor Day to you as well! Our time is of the essence. We must learn to live it with passion. Great write Paul. ~SH~|