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Compleatly Empty by Deborah L Logan Wednesday, October 30, 2002 Share Print Save Become a Fan Completely Empty Deep darkness Alone in a crowd Screaming tears Cut my skin Break my heart Calm my fears Panic sets in Life goes on My breathing stops I can't let go Hold tighter, tighter, tighter Taste the salty drops No chance at forever Desperately afraid I've made my own grave I can't keep it down Given up on me Only you will I save.
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Reviewed by Lunetta Toriana	11/1/2002

Great write! Very emotional




Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader)	10/31/2002

Sometimes you save others and do not take care of yourself. When it all comes down to it, there is only you. Look out for #1...good write




Reviewed by Drkman	10/31/2002

Deb, I feel as though I have just been out in an emotional hurricane. Great venting write. Drkman




Reviewed by Ashley Mulas	10/30/2002

well written sweetheart. your writing is almost as beautiful as you. love you. ~Ashes~