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My Tragedy
by Bourge
Sunday, July 17, 2005
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This is my barbed wire tragedy,
these concrete walls were built for me.
Alone and dark,
my cast-iron heart
has never felt so free.

This is the graveyard of my eyes,
things fall apart, although we try.
This place is dead
inside my head,
but somehow I can't cry.

This is my epitaph come true ,
I hid, and stayed away from you.
I built myself
as someone else,
and I just wish you knew.

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Reviewed by M Flack 9/5/2005
Wow is one word to describe this poem. Very moody and Gothic in nature...
Perhaps even a little cryptic in its' message...
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/18/2005
Haunting imagery, chilling verse--excellently conveyed! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Reviewed by Brian Pellerino 7/18/2005
Charli,

You float untethered in this forlornity. Your detached regret is heartwrenching. Very emotive and understated.

Peace,

B
Reviewed by Sue Hess 7/18/2005
i can relate to this very well, excellent poem
Reviewed by jude forese 7/17/2005
the real tragedy is when we keep our love to ourselves ...
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/17/2005
So very deep and dark, this touches the soul, excellent poem.

Reindeer
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