Will You
by David Leigh
Sunday, March 30, 2003
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A romantic sonnet for a change. |
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Will you?
Mist obscures, but pen procures a deep thought
Held like cloud in the roof of a forest,
So poignant and with so much energy,
The flight of a paradise kingfisher.
Wings beat the air, he darts like a sentence
Across a page of my life yet to come.
This letter holds that reflection of you
Poised to make its own journey to your heart.
Will you, dare you, breath those words I long for?
Have you feelings enough to say you’ll come?
The forest speaks of your presence, a time
When you were here before, the butterfly
That sat on your hand had no need to fly.
The mist hangs like a question mark, will you?
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/30/2003 |
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| Beautiful ! Love that picture too. |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/30/2003 |
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Excellent Sonnet! Such a lovely poem, And that lovely picture just takes my breath away,
Beautiful,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
3/30/2003 |
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| Such a beautiful sonnet it is. |
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| Reviewed by Sally Odgers |
3/30/2003 |
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| A lovely piece (as usual). Like the extended metaphor of sentence/letter/sonnet. |
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