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Shadows in the Mirror
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Patsy J Lewis
Wednesday, March 17, 2004
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Painful Recollections
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Shadows in the Mirror
Shadows in the mirror
Ghostly figures in my mind
Images on the windowpane
Memories of a time gone by
Is that you, with the sunlight
Setting your hair aglow?
I can almost feel your heartbeat,
See the shining of your soul.
Shifting wisps of fading hopes
Elusive as the campfire's smoke
Torturing my aching heart,
Slipping past my reaching hands
They're just shadows in the mirror
Ghostly figures in my mind
Images on the windowpane
Memories of a time gone by.
Patsy J Lewis
Copyright 2004
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| Reviewed by Mark Mahoney |
3/25/2006 |
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| written so very well this, most definately captured every emotion in such a great write, very well done, take care...Mark |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
3/17/2004 |
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| Excellent! Very well written. Bill Murray |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
3/17/2004 |
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| Very well done in a longing but lost love |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
3/17/2004 |
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Hauntingly good.
"Is that you, with the sunlight
Setting your hair aglow?
I can almost feel your heartbeat,
See the shining of your soul." |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/17/2004 |
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nice write, patsy; very well done! enjoyed~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar |
3/17/2004 |
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| Very interesting write, style seems familiar! |
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