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The story of my life in poetry
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It's early in the morning and the freshness of the day spreads itself across my senses as the night flees away and The love of the Father falls fresh on those He loves I am filled with His Spirit I am one with the Lord Oh! Look upon His beauty, Just bask in His love Open little heartbud, for your time has come to give off that sweet aroma, that is special just to you. Open to the Father and be filled with the dew Many have been waiting for the day of your blooming They need to inhale the aroma of your offering The treasure of yourself, once tightly bound, is now revealed in all its beauty. The pain you have suffered has enhanced your fragrance The winds and rain have made you strong Your purpose for being, to give glory to the Father. His labor of love over you has been long. Now, maturing, revealing your destiny,lift your petals to the Son Soft jewels of dew drops adorn you in splendor, So, Open little heartbud, for your time has come. Bloom, little heartbud, the world has been waiting, And the Father has been waiting, Too.
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
8/26/2006 |
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Blessed are those that can sing the beauty of life.
"Heartbud" brings the sound of life to one's soul's ears.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Ernest Gwagwa (Reader) |
6/11/2005 |
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I like the flowing style. It gives the poem a sense of naturalness and portrays true emotions and a naturally flowing relatioship you have with your God.You use strong imagery yet you do not sacrifice content and tone in the process. Keep it up.
Arthur Ernest Gwagwa : Award winning poet & Critic |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
3/28/2004 |
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Patsy,
Enjoyed this wonderfully penned poem - kudos!
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/19/2004 |
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Beautiful poetry, Patsy! Very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I agree wholeheartedly with Pastor Eddie; you ARE a gifted writer, and you are one of THE best ones here! |
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| Reviewed by Eddie Thompson |
3/18/2004 |
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| oooo..i simply loved this poem...you are truly talented...one of the best in AD, in my opinion. |
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