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IF We Had An Ever
by Shawn Ness
Monday, September 14, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I stand before the world shattered and humbled beyond belief. The light at the end of the tunnel is missing but I can find it if I keep searching. I can’t sleep, I can’t eat… There has to be something better than this. Up is hopefully a step away. The below is not good but I scribbled it on the back of a letter to Chris - my wife of whom I am separated from and repair does not look good. I know everyone has their own problems but writing mine help. |
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If we had an ever,
I’d wait for you,
However long it takes.
If we had an ever,
I would do whatever
It takes to make it right.
If we had an ever,
I would love, cherish
And be enamored with you forever.
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
9/17/2009 |
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| Very beautiful writing sweet man..stay safe and well..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Derek Jones |
9/14/2009 |
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Heart felt, emotional and vulnerable truly a great poem
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
9/14/2009 |
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Maybe one day there will be a light at the end of the tunnel and all will be whole again, never give up.....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/14/2009 |
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...we do have ever's don't give up...my prayers are with you both.
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
9/14/2009 |
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| Beautiful poetry. Enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
9/14/2009 |
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Excellent and great poem,take care
EDWIN |
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