|Reviewed by 000 000
|Some dreams are haunting-but the dreams of children are magical.
|Reviewed by . ignis
|Dreams are places where Truth seeks refuge when this illusion becomes unbearable|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|for a 17 year old this poem's really good!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Yes some dreams die.........to make room for new ones :-) Good write.|
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|A beautiful poem, was spawned from a beautiful little girl. :o)|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I believe the little girl of 17 writing about her dreams is still alive and has not given up on the possibility that her dreams may yet come true.A dream does not die I think I heard someone say only the dreamer and you are far too young and talented to die so let's wait for your dreams to happen.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Never give up your dreams. See it the way you want it to be in your imagination, and it will happen. (From the "bible" of goal setting.)
Well done at 17.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Powerfully sad piece about growing up and leaving our innocence behind, and your last stanza says it all.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Awww bittersweet...but beautiful package!!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|The heart stays forevever young. Splendid poem.|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|It's a lovely piece, ah sweet youth why did
you leave so quickly. ;) Beautiful poem!
|Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati
|"In my dreams,
Life was a dance,
With lots of loving,
And romance. " The dreams are more true when grown up ! dreams of love and romance are delightful at any ae! you are so cue when you were a small girl and many thanks to have reposted this poem now!! you must be more beautiful now with maturity and wisdom dear Hottran! Bye!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Beautifully written C. Thanks for reposting it!
Love the photo!;-)
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah, so deeply poignant and true, alas, no one stays forever in paradise...just love that.