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A Body of Water by Jen Bennett Friday, February 07, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan
It can only be found between the third eye A memory pool; fathoms wide Shimmers like agate against marrow sky A bliss serene, knee-deep inside The wind comes out only on turbulent days Birds high fly; two Moon alive Peeking Sun breaks the clouded maze The mountain grass, all creatures thrive The banks are wet with washed up thoughts An innocent wave; the sky's crest Hoping to see how turbulence is wrought Aqualine hammers, harmony yet unmessed The waves recede from overbearing Sun's rays The light fades; two Moons hide Loud voices drain all with nothing to say Different light beams, all lose inside

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Reviewed by Matthew Rosenbaum (Reader)	5/3/2010

I love this poem. I like this style, it has a top layer, then has a, and sometimes even multiple, true meaning. And your poem is really good, i think, because it goes really deep and even the true meaning of one part contradicted the first, top layer, of the writing making it even better! Also having more thought put in by makeing many things clear, using words that play off of each other. I really like your writing. -matt




Reviewed by diana smith	4/23/2007

it was kool Jen Bennett i like it




Reviewed by angela ortiz	4/23/2007

way 2 go it was great




Reviewed by Adam Walsvik	5/19/2003

I sense that you have a very courageous soul. Adam