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My Desire For You.
I walked my desire for you
like a dog on a leash,
firmly snapping to heel
my feelings of breathless anticipation.
But my desire for you would
and in a fleeting moment
tore from me and sank
it's teeth into you and
tore you to
Lust poured from your wounds
and with wanton madness
i dropped to my knees.
I called the dog,
still dragging it's leash
and as it came reluctant
I vowed to hold on tighter next time.
I search for you with slow haste,
rushing carefully into my eagerness
with orderly chaos.
I want to get it right spontaneously
because i want to take no second chance
with this impulsive obsession.
My soul is under lock and key now
lying naked for you to see
and the mere thought of touching it fills me
with the sweetest revulsion
I search now with slow haste.
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|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Searching to be found. Slowly it is and sometimes we have to wait for the best thingss in life. Good write here. Easily read and presented.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Exceptional to say the least! WOW!!
|Reviewed by firstname.lastname@example.org Bennett
|IT IS ALWAYS A PLEASURE TO READ SUCH FINE WORK.|
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Thank you Dora, this is such an erotic piece, left to no imagination. Thanx for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your friend and sister in poetry and prose, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Great expression in this. I really enjoyed this, thanks.
|Reviewed by Hanley Harding
...an excellent and arousing write! I am not very keen on free verse, but I very much enjoyed this. I write mostly lyrical poetry... you may be interested in my "Crystal Dreams" and "The Touch".
All the best to you and yours,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Another great one, I think you are going to be well read here on the den. Good luck.