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Please Tell Me by Catherine N Monday, July 28, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan

Written July 10, 2003..my eighth poem Please Tell Me Please tell me what else I should have done-- All I knew to do was run. I didn't know what else to do--- I tried and tried to get through to you! It seemed hopeless in every case-- I got so weary of running the race! When I felt sad or lonely--I'd go and tell you, But it only left me feeling bluer than blue! I'd cry and you would ignore me-- Instead of being the friend I desperately need! Sometimes you'd just get mad--- I guess it all was just old hat! You've hurt me too-- Even though you don't know how! Anyway, none of that really matters now. You never made me feel I was good enough-- I could never understand why. I think of all that has happened and I cry, cry, cry! I'm always wrong--I'll never be right-- So why even bother with the fight? Catherine Mott Napaluch Copyright �2003 Catherine Mott Napaluch

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Reviewed by Kay Mott	5/6/2005

Very sad poem for me to read seeing as I'm your big sister. I love your writing Sis because, your always true to yourself and others in your words. The review of Taylor was very wrong. You have never shown to be a needy character in your family, much less friends. Your one of the strongest ladies I know. Six boys and over 20 years of marriage. You are a shining example that marrying your first love can work in this day and age. There are always ups and downs in a life long relationship. Taylor must have not read Anniversary Sweetheart.




Reviewed by Nicholas Mott	3/14/2004

very expressive...i liked this one too :) awesome write




Reviewed by Jack Roberts	7/30/2003

Excellant write Cathy! Well done! Jack




Reviewed by E T Waldron	7/29/2003

excellent poetry! evokes many emotions....




Reviewed by Mark Mahoney	7/28/2003

Very nicely done,this says a lot of everything about you, well done...take care...Mark ...




Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)	7/28/2003

Very good poem. Sometimes you can wear out your friends with the neediness, though.




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	7/28/2003

heartwrenching write, catherine! :( (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. >tears < thank you for your sweet review; now it is my turn to leave one for YOU! :)




Reviewed by Jackie Brooks	7/28/2003

Cathy - I know that feeling so well, tears clouding my eyes, I certainly hope that you find (or found)the happiness you deserve. Jackie <> <




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	7/28/2003

Very sad write and a person that you do not need in your life.




Reviewed by Zenith Elliott	7/28/2003

Abuse comes in many forms and this person doesn't sound worthy of you...hopefully happiness will come your way soon. Good write I can feel your pain and frustration. ~Z~