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Breath Taking Beauty
by Breia` C Gaskins

Thursday, October 15, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I love this beautiful female that just takes my breath away...

I saw her one day, sitting there so lonesome.

She turned around and saw me watching her and she smiled.

And when she smiled that beautiful smile, it took my breath away.

Her smooth, silky hair swinging in the wind.

And when she laughs it sounds like doves singing their beautiful song.

As I got to know her, I realized that her personality matched her beauty.

As I look into her beautiful eyes I get lost.

Wishing to stay lost forever.

Her beauty takes my breath away.

Im speechless and glad to have such a breath taking beauty.

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Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 10/18/2009
Beautiful poem,take care
Reviewed by steve Chering 10/15/2009
Did she have a beard? this would have made the whole thing awkward.
"comic write" made me laugh. well done.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/15/2009
I like the open honesty of the feelings you had for this girl, would make one sugestion and that would be to use some other word in place of beautiful such as: disarming smile, heart warming song, and captivating or soulfull eyes. You have beauty in the title, in the second last line and the last line so just too repetitive. Hope I don't offend you with my suggestion for I think it is a great poem.

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