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I hate it when....
by Sarah J Beara
Saturday, November 16, 2002
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I hate it when I don't know what to write,
When above my head there's no little light.
I hate it when nothing interesting is going on,
When all my inspiration is gone.
I hate it when the words just don't flow,
When it doesn't seem like anything will go!
I hate it when I can't write worth beans,
I hope some authors out there know what I mean,
I hate it when I can't write a poem,
When I feel like I'm just a drone,
I can see this poem is going nowhere,
In fact my sister is giving me a funny glare,
So I better finish up with this.
I hate it when I'm not confused or sad or mad or not fighting with my sis! |
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I have a blank head right now, I HATE it when I can't think of anything to write! and as for the last lines usually my inspiration comes from when I'm unhappy! Go figure.
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| Reviewed by Kacie Rahm |
11/17/2002 |
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| much enjoyed, weve ALL been there, it's a poets life....It gives a whole new meaning to the phrase "starving artist" Starving for words as oppose to money and fame |
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| Reviewed by Tulula Tadswickle |
11/17/2002 |
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| Hey sarah! yet again this is Logan and just to let you know this is an awesome poem and I really like it! |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
11/16/2002 |
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This one reminds me of my own two poems "One Of These Days" and "Inspirations Lost".
Nicely done!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by jing javier |
11/16/2002 |
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yeah, agree with dad roger.
we all go through that stage.. cheer up! |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
11/16/2002 |
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| Dichotomy - Saying you have nothing to say and saying it so very well. |
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