by JoLynn M Williams
Sunday, November 10, 2002
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Whats impotant in life is how we treat eachother.Life isn't about how many people call you and it's not about who you've dated, are dating or haven't dated at all. It isn't about who you've kissed, what sport you play, or which guys or girl likes you. It isn't about your shoes or your hair or the color of yor skin or where you live or even where you go to school. In fact, it's not about grades, money, clothes, or college that exepts you or not. Life isn't about if you have lots of friends or, if you are alone, and it's not about how accepted you are. Life isn't about that butlife is about who you love and who you hurt. It's about how you feel about yourself. It's about trust, happiness and compassion. It's about sticking up for your friends and replacing inner hate with love. Life is about avoiding jealousy, overcoming ingorance and building confidence. Most of all, it's about choosing to use your life to touch someone else's in a way that could never have been achieved otherwise. These choises are what life's about.
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|Reviewed by stacey
|Hey Jolynn nice work. Its true what u said. keep up the good work.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|jolynn, you did a great write, here! awesome, kiddo! love, your friend, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) :)|
|Reviewed by JoLynn Williams
|thank you all for reading this poem of mine. i wrote this becasue some of my friends think that they have to be the best and some of them dont. and some others think just because you are not like them you are not part of the group.|
|Reviewed by Breanne Hanson
|that was an awesome poem. keep writing.|
|Reviewed by Sarah Beara
|Good job jolynn, that was a great start. The only advice i have is to use the line break inbetween some lines so its makes more sense. GREAT JOB GIRL! WRITE ON!|
|Reviewed by Sally Montoye
|So very true wise soul!!!! Write On!|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|You are so right on what you say dear. And welcome to AD Bill|
|Reviewed by Kacie Rahm
|wow Jolynn, its Kaci:) Welcome to Authors Den. this is great. Good start!|