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|Reviewed by Breezy hanson (Reader)
|nice one jolynn but like kaci sia dyour only 12 u will have your turn one day!|
|Reviewed by Sarah Beara
|Good jon jolynn, its a little intense but very good. Try a line break or two though :)|
|Reviewed by Kacie Rahm
|woah, calm down! you're 12, u dont even know what love us yet!|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Yes always and ever forever and ever. May it be so! Bill|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|lovely write, jo lynn!|