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GREENHOUSE GIRL by Cui Jian, a new version by Joel Sattler
by Joel Sattler

Tuesday, January 18, 2011
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GREENHOUSE GIRL by Cui Jian, a new version by Joel Sattler based on the original lyrics


 


Was walking past you all alone


But I had nothing I could say


I dared not look into your face


Oh! I looked!


You asked me where I’m gonna go


I pointed to the ocean so


And then you laughed and gave me hope


Oh! I’m hooked!


You asked me where I’m gonna go


And then you laughed and I had hope


 


Inside your greenhouse I was led


your perfume went right to my head


Before I knew it I forget


What - was done


You said I’m strong enough for you


I said you were the nicest too


And someday we would both become


Oh - as one


Inside your greenhouse I was led


your perfume went right to my head


Inside your greenhouse I was led


your perfume went right to my head  


 


You want to keep me in this house


And make me just another mouse


I looked at you what did I see


Oh! Not me!


But I wish I could return to you


And be the thing you want me to


I could not stay but part of me


Oh! Could not leave


 


You want to keep me in this house


And make me just another mouse


I looked at you what did I see


Oh! Not me!


But I wish I could return to you


And be the thing you want me to


I could not stay but part of me


Oh! Could not leave 


 


You’ll always be my greenhouse girl


A memory of a different world


While all of life around me swirls


You are my pearl


You’ll always be my greenhouse girl


A memory of a different world


While all of life around me swirls


Oh! My girl…..


 


 


 


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Original version in Chinese:


 


 


花房姑娘


 


 


 


/:崔健


编曲:韩贤光


 


我独自走过你身边


并没有话要对你说


我不敢抬头看着你的


......脸庞


 


问我要去向何方


我指着大海的方向


你的惊奇像是给我


......赞扬


 


问我要去向何方


我指着大海的方向


 


带我走进你的花房


我无法逃脱花的迷香


我不知不觉忘记了


......方向


 


说我世上最坚强


说你上最善良


我不知不觉已和花儿


......


 


说我世上最坚强


说你上最善良


 


你要我留在这地


你要我和它们一样


我看着你默默地


......不能这样


 


我想要回到老地方


我想要走在老路上


这时我才知离不开你


......姑娘


 


我就要回到老地方


我就要走在老路上


我明知我已离不开你


......我的姑娘


 


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My version is based on a recording by Cui Jian:


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SWopZYoCAIA 


 


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Reviewed by Alan Abrams 1/18/2011
tannhauser and venus, ulysses and circe, joel and the greenhouse girl
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