|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|You did the form justice my friend. Excellent work, beautiful composition. Thanks for your recent comments. It is good to see your work again.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|This is superb..wish I could write sonnets..however I dislike rules so I'll never write one...lol!!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I absolutely love this sonnet, Carmen. I am moved by the sentiments expressed throughout the poem for I can completely relate to them and the meaning therein. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|Faith and devotion fill the lines of this poem with exceptional beauty. THE WISH shines a light of joy and grace through the reader's heart.
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|nicely done!! please check out
Haiku ..... 4th grade boys, the kids are so thrilled they are on the internet!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|A wish well thought, Carmen...a lovely prayer.
|Reviewed by Jill Carpenter
|This is so nice. I'm glad I stopped by and found this gem. Thank you for sharing it, it was enjoyed. J|
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|A wonderfully inspired piece Carmen.
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|This is so lovely, Carmen; wistful and fluid! Straight from the heart and soul. Perfect picture.
Peace and Blessings,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a most inspired meaning within this polished poem ...|
|Reviewed by Helga Ross
|Carmen, this is wonderful!|
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Wonderful piece that fits the form and satisfies the content for the reader. Good job, Carmen. I'm glad I stopped by.
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Outstanding, Carmen. You did a great job with the form: the meaning inspires, and the poem flows. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Sonnetina Uno Perfecto/a?? Both in form and in concept - and the picture is divine... what a perfect little honey... I may just give this a whirl, Carmen, thank you... LOL Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A marvelous poetic wish, Carmen.|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Quintessentially Carmen Ruggero. Which is to say, remarkable.
Which is to say it inadequately. Love the poem, love the writer.
A l w a y s, 'Pea'
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Beautifully penned, Carmen; I haven't tried this form. Love the emotion and imagery you paint in your lines. BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Art flows on to meet wisdom, and an outstanding compostion is fully
delivered through the lines of "The Wish [Sonnetina Uno]".
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I'm keeping this one! What a gift! This is what I call perfection Carmen!The sryle, meter and mostly the sentiments;-) Outstanding!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Fabulous. Gotta love it, and I do. This is good stuff.|
|Reviewed by J M
|This is something to keep for nostalic memories a beautiful poem of a mothers heartfelt wishes for their child to grow strong and guarded by God. Beautiful work Carmen!|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|When your child or children stay as close as possible to God, their futures are guaranteed, and their safety and personal happiness assured !
This is an exquisite and unusual sonnet derived straight from your honest heart Carmen !
And that Classic picture is so endearing !