|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|this is a grand narrative...excellent flow and rhythm...I love the way you blended both the magic and spirituality of nature in this.|
|Reviewed by Rose Loya
|Beautiful, just beautiful. I walked down that road with you as I read, I probably walk it more than I'd like to think. Thank you for the inspiration of one more morning.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Inspiration comes and goes
just let it flow
Peace & Love
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Solitude and despair and dawning and hope -- wonderful realization, Carmen...so it is in life.
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Outstanding Carmen! I loved this. Great visions.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Wonderfully descriptive and meaningful verses, Carmen. I was fully drawn into the beauty of your narrative and the inspiration behind it. Love the contrasting scenes here. TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Thank God for each "one more time" that inspires you to write poems like this Carmen! Splendid! A Keeper for sure, thank you!;-)
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|What an outstanding write dear friend, you've woven a beautiful tapestry with your wonderful imagery allowing the reader to see the story not only read it! Always a pleasure to stop by!
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Outstanding imagery and flow... "When Night Falls" glows as a page to enrich POETRY. A true poetic feast under the music of Euterpia and approval of ERATO.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Wonderfully meaningful, Carmen. This speaks to the depth of "me." Thank you. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh most outstanding imagery....wonderful offering!!
Happy Easter Sis!!
|Reviewed by Kathryn Collins
|Oh Carmen what a joy to read your poetry again. This is an incredible poem. You are, indeed, the yarnspinner. This may not be a yarn at all. You have spun from the empty night a picture of many "like a whisper" in the night. So many are poems waiting to come.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Night lasts for only a moment; hope comes with the rising of the sun and words. What a beautifully imaged poem; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by J M
This is so beautiful and meaningful... I Love this part especially.
"A poem, a poem I am…
I am with no beginning, I am with no end.
And morning came to me one more time."
Your poetry is always ezquisite each with its own classical touch of grace..
Blessings and a Blessed Easter,
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Very nice work...the flow of this piece places one within the same settings of your thoughts, an enjoyable read to place reflection upon....
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Yup, like it or not, you're in eternity...
Vivid poem, I could see the whole scene..
|Reviewed by Pier Tyler
|Vivid and interesting. I like this one.|
|Reviewed by RD Larson
|You write so eloquently and honestly. I treasure every word that you write, Carmen. And morning shall come more than once . . . . until you are a very old old grandmother. And your poems and writings will always be. Always.
Keep writing always. For your work is so heart-touching and mind-wrenching that your readers love you; love your work.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Your poetry rhymes with the flow of the day. Dreams clear out the cob webs to leave your mind free to write more beaurifully than before. Enjoyed this much.