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|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Well, now, John, melt my monitor, why don't you? Passion flows in every word...and now I'm going to have to go take a cold shower! :) Why? Because you crossed the line--into hot, hot territory! LOL WELL DONE!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|SheeeeeeeMaMa...this is one Cool HOT write from you....HollyMouly's it's well penned!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I could feel the heat in this one. Great write!|