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|Reviewed by jude forese
|Reviewed by D.J. Ludlow
|There is talent in the words but no substance in the poem. But perhaps this is the point, you see no substance in life - no purpose. But if you set all down, even softly, and retain nothing then the mind may indeed be awake - but empty. Best seek wisdom to weigh the substance of life to sift it and feel its worth in order that you might know what is worthy of keeping. In whom to trust, in whom to believe, in whom to have faith!
Merry Christmas also!
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|You practice a lot or reflection. Has it given you any direction? I hope so. Does wheel spinning describe your life. Kind of sounds like it. Merry Christmas Bill Murray|