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| Reviewed by HB Clayton |
8/21/2007 |
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| A lot of hurt in this one. Beautiful Pen - HB |
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| Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk |
8/18/2007 |
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| heartfelt writing Tinka...Great thoughts throughout the poem, loved the flow in reading your writings...Hugs and Love, Peggy |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
8/18/2007 |
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| poignant |
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| Reviewed by M Flack |
8/16/2007 |
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Loneliness is a deep pain that can visit even those who are amongst family and friends. It is that small piece of our heart or soul that feels like it is missing something...
Painfully beautiful write... |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
8/15/2007 |
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Beautiful expression of love that escaped
Within a gaze of the night!
Beautifully written poetic thoughts
Excellent imagery and flow and very intriguing piece!
Love Peace and Hugssss to you....Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by Ari Puso |
8/15/2007 |
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gazing into the night
beneath the pale moon rising
a tiny seed has grown sturdy
sparkling moonbeams on its leaves
signify reflections of joy ahead
from a fuzzy light of hope
to silky shades of dawn
welcomes the grandeur morning sun
where her sadness disappears
emerge so bright is her smile...
beautiful write friend! Ari |
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| Reviewed by M Wood |
8/15/2007 |
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| What went wrong can be put right with love and purposeful prayer... Another great write Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
8/14/2007 |
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Masterfully done! Filled with inner passion and insight.....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/14/2007 |
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So deeply felt Tinks I have a pain in my heart for you from this one!
superb poem!
Love and hugs,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
8/14/2007 |
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| This character you have created here Sissy is tactile and easy to embrace in the senses. Well done! Blessings and love from big bro ... |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
8/14/2007 |
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Missing out is a nightmare, perhaps
only the stars can heal you. I hope
so Tinky. |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) |
8/14/2007 |
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| I agree with Kate...this is a most 'intense' expression, and done well. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
8/14/2007 |
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As we went over the churning waters of the Cape Horn, the Southern Cross was leading the way.
Tinka, you certainly knows your skies.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
8/14/2007 |
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| Poignant and very "midnight", Tinks. Love the intensity and the deep meaningfulness of that Southern Cross. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/14/2007 |
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Were you watching the Perseids? Just wondering...
in any event, a most beautiful write; very well done, Tinks! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
8/14/2007 |
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| Deeply touching Tinka. Beautiful pen. |
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| Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine |
8/14/2007 |
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| Ah yes! Beautiful write. R |
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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
8/14/2007 |
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| Mystically charming! |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
8/14/2007 |
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| Missing something wonderful is painful. I loved the reference to the southern cross. It brought home all the pain of love. Victor |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
8/14/2007 |
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A nice expression of love lost within a gaze of the night...enjoyable piece, Tinka...
Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/14/2007 |
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| Another powerfully sad piece, Tinky Belle. And I truly hope much brighter days and nights are ahead. |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
8/14/2007 |
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Another beautiful offering from a beautiful heart.
Isn't the Southern Cross a beautiful wonder?
Walt
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/14/2007 |
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The beuty of this write glows like the beauty of the Southern Cross on a summer night and shines on long after we finish reading it. The pain of realization that love can not be requitted only dreamed abou in the presence of another is a pain that never seems to end.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Missy Cross |
8/14/2007 |
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| Isn't it amazing how those insights become so clear with the night, and the stard? I shiver from the truth in this. Wonderful. |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
8/14/2007 |
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| Oh Sweet One! This beautiful write went straight to my heart! It touched me so because I can so relate to the feelings so wonderfully expressed here! LOVE YA! SC |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
8/14/2007 |
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| Very powerful write Tinka. The music certainly brought out the sadness. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/14/2007 |
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| Your romantic heart bleeds in this powerful poem. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
8/14/2007 |
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| So full of love <>Attached forever <>Felt by souls everywhere_{Only love -Ted} |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
8/14/2007 |
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Tinka,
Premonitions come with all types of inspirations. Bless You Always, Paul
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