|Reviewed by David Young
|Your touch is ah so special of creation of verse.|
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Tinka I hope you are okay, I am sorry I am so slow in keeping up with everything, but know you are in my thoughts and prayers
In Christs Love
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Tinka this is a very painful and sad write
Gossip can't be very painful but don't let
Anything ever turn the light of stars in your eyes
The door opens and closes don't let it hit you!
Tinka very deep and painful write!!
Take Care Peace Love and Light...Morning Star
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The last line is disturbing, Tinka.
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|That's how it goes when life is beautiful as it is. the divine interplay of destiny and the drama of daily life. love is love is love, eternal, and anything else is a pale shade. Blessings, soul.|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|it is as clear as mud and it covers the earth - this sounds far too painful Tinka -- much love and peace to you my friend -- JMW|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|sounds like a great poetic rant, with no slant to me Tinks, have a great v-day, hugs&love|
|Reviewed by M Flack
|Sometimes the hardest thing to dois to let go.
But in letting we we embrace the freedom of Gods love.
Take care and travel safe.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Ouch. Powerfully painful and meaningfully expressive. Love, peace, healing and my best wishes to you, TinkaSweets.
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|whew...those hippos don't look too friendly|
|Reviewed by Pamela garner
|sadly this pain is so common in this world today. but never lose the spark in your eyes. live for yourself and hold your head high. Beautiful pen as always. Pamela|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Painful and yet unfortunately powerfully true.
|Reviewed by m w
|So much pain, hurts to read but who could resist such finely penned verse|
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Beautifully written poem with deep,dark thoughts and feelings,take care
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Sad, beautiful, powerful.|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|You have a great style of writing
I enjoy every line
Love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
This is why you're sooooo incredibly good . . . fantastic!!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|It is sad that even the best familys have some bad apples and all I can say is we must always look at the overall picture because for every bad apple we encounter on the den there is a whole orchard of bright red apples...
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|That's a tellin him Tinka
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Walk Away And Don't Look Back...
|Reviewed by Carin Spirit
|Dear Tinka ~ This is so well written and must be a sad state of affairs.
Shouldn't you take the gossip to the friend? ...and ask WTF. Friends are too far and few between.
"They had to run to me…And gossip became the order of my day Now I have to say goodbye"
I have heard that the best way to get word to a person, is to tell someone else and ask them please not to say anything to the person, sometimes it's the only way!!
Just a thought Warmth and Love to you, Carin~
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Sometimes it is the hurt and pain that gives us the strength we need to become who we are meant to be. A very powerful write you share as we watch the stars in your eyes shine brighter. Take care Tinka.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|You're ever in my prayers, (((Sweet Tinka))); how I wish you could find the joy and happiness that you rightfully deserve! Sad, sad write!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( >tears! <
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Tinka this sure tugs at the heart...|
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|((((( Oh Tinky }}}}}
Don't ever let the stars fade in your eyes no matter who you encounter in your life. I won't let that happened to me either!!!
Carry on being happy!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|We move around sometimes trying to make sense of things that are just meant to be, no sense to be made. We try to move forward but we take two steps backward. Then again timing is off, we hope and we hurt at the same time. We move along hoping for another chance at what we wish for.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|I wonder if that kind of people are born that way of someone took the time to twist them that way?
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Good bye and don't let the door hit you on the way out, is an old Irish expression when you get rid of a person who has overstayed his welcome.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You wanted censorship
Not a relationship
Now I will just say
Goodbye my friend
Very sadly, that's often all we can do.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Please. If you value yourself, get out of that situation, save your life, or there will be no stars in your eyes - for REAL. Such sadness in these lines - my heart breaks for you. You continue to remain in my prayers.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
|Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines
|Yep, Bonnie has it right (as always, she is so uplifting). I feel the hurt in this writing. Let the hurt have its way for it is closure. Tears will wash away the pain, for an ended love is not ever the end of the world, and making bright new memories will (honest) take away the dark.
Be well Sweetie
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|Oh Tinka this was absolutely beautifully painful...we all get hurt when we put our hearts out there...the pain makes us know they didn't kill us...we could close up or continue the journey to find a spirit that lifes our soul...great write...love and hugs, Bonnie|