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Just Waiting
by Tinka Boukes
Wednesday, October 19, 2011
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                                 “Just Waiting”

        Sitting at my favorite spot… it’s late at night
                        Listening to some sad music
                  Once again I pen this moment down

Upon my forehead there’s a deep frown
I ask my self the question!!
Why do I feel like crying… by the thought of you?
But my pen runs dry… all the time!!
Not even trying to resist these emotions deep
My tears runs freely down my cheek
As my thoughts runs wild
Wild and free with envy

Thinking about you… and me
Why can’t we be just who we want to be?
Wild and free

Just forever young
Why?

Oh God why does it hurt so much
Just thinking about what is lost
I feel like I am going crazy
For this moment
I am just so damn sad
Sad and alone
So very lonely

All on my own

 

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Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 10/23/2011
Hi Tinka! You write like you've been spying on my life!!! Reading this makes me feel a little less alone... thank you for sharing...

In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/23/2011
Thinka, we can be exactly who we want to be -- as far as forever young, that is an altogether different challenge my dear friend -- my personal motto is, cheer up it will get worse -- that permits me to put everything in proper perspective -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend --- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 10/22/2011
One can certainly feet the heartbreak and empathize with the narrator. Emotive piece. ~Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 10/21/2011
This tugged at my heart...wish I could be there to hug you.
Love from
your poetry pal
Kay
Reviewed by Mary Rincon 10/21/2011
I can feel your sadness and your pain,It touches my heart .
Reviewed by jude forese 10/21/2011
this confessional lament deeply touches the heart ...
Reviewed by Joy Hale 10/21/2011
A sad, introspective look at the broken heart of one who has loved and lost. Amazing details; one knows you have lived this and feels the sadness in your very being. I hope this hurt soon leaves you. Loved your poem... I am a new fan of your work.

Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/20/2011
Reading this makes my heart feel such kindred feelings, Tinka.
Your poem encompasses beautifully the suffering of such earnest pain and love.
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Andy Turner 10/20/2011
Lonely? Maybe. But never alone. bloodyallblacksandfrance.
Reviewed by William Bonilla 10/20/2011
An excellent sad write
Long time No see
I am as happy as a Mockingbird
singing in the early morn....
to see you back

Love & Peace be with you

Hope mt friendly words bring you
a little sunshine......
William
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 10/20/2011
Sad. Love it. Liz
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 10/20/2011
i am sorry--yoour saddness hurts my heart
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 10/20/2011
A sad and compelling offering today Tinka, hope better days are ahead for you.

Carole~
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/20/2011
Why can’t we be just who we want to be?
Wild and free
Just forever young
Why?

Questions many ask themselves, each and every day,
And I hope sadness is replaced with happiness soon.

Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/19/2011
Hauntingly sad...
fee
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/19/2011
Such compelling and moving verses, Tinka. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 10/19/2011
Sadness is difficult to understand. Many who have not experienced it do not realize the pain it causes. You did an excellent job of describing depression.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 10/19/2011
Hey, I don't wanna hear that your down, you are always so up...so get up off the ground & let me read that wonderful smile you have...as well, grab that bike and send it to me, I like that style...Ed
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 10/19/2011
Oh Tinka! So sorry to catch you at such low ebb but certainly you express here the desperation felt by many who feel they inhabit somehow the "wrong life" and that they're not where or even who they should be. The intensity, longing and sincerity of heart are palpable and it's certainly true that pain makes the pen fly... Bless you, Darlin. Bristol seems so far away now, but I still cherish deeply its fond remembrance. Refind that beautiful smile! Love always, Kate xx
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