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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
10/23/2011 |
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Hi Tinka! You write like you've been spying on my life!!! Reading this makes me feel a little less alone... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
10/23/2011 |
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| Thinka, we can be exactly who we want to be -- as far as forever young, that is an altogether different challenge my dear friend -- my personal motto is, cheer up it will get worse -- that permits me to put everything in proper perspective -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend --- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
10/22/2011 |
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| One can certainly feet the heartbreak and empathize with the narrator. Emotive piece. ~Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
10/21/2011 |
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This tugged at my heart...wish I could be there to hug you.
Love from
your poetry pal
Kay |
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| Reviewed by Mary Rincon |
10/21/2011 |
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| I can feel your sadness and your pain,It touches my heart . |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/21/2011 |
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| this confessional lament deeply touches the heart ... |
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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
10/21/2011 |
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A sad, introspective look at the broken heart of one who has loved and lost. Amazing details; one knows you have lived this and feels the sadness in your very being. I hope this hurt soon leaves you. Loved your poem... I am a new fan of your work.
Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
10/20/2011 |
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Reading this makes my heart feel such kindred feelings, Tinka.
Your poem encompasses beautifully the suffering of such earnest pain and love.
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
10/20/2011 |
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| Lonely? Maybe. But never alone. bloodyallblacksandfrance. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
10/20/2011 |
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An excellent sad write
Long time No see
I am as happy as a Mockingbird
singing in the early morn....
to see you back
Love & Peace be with you
Hope mt friendly words bring you
a little sunshine......
William |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
10/20/2011 |
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| Sad. Love it. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/20/2011 |
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| i am sorry--yoour saddness hurts my heart |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
10/20/2011 |
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A sad and compelling offering today Tinka, hope better days are ahead for you.
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/20/2011 |
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Why can’t we be just who we want to be?
Wild and free
Just forever young
Why?
Questions many ask themselves, each and every day,
And I hope sadness is replaced with happiness soon.
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/19/2011 |
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Hauntingly sad...
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/19/2011 |
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Such compelling and moving verses, Tinka. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
10/19/2011 |
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Sadness is difficult to understand. Many who have not experienced it do not realize the pain it causes. You did an excellent job of describing depression.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
10/19/2011 |
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| Hey, I don't wanna hear that your down, you are always so up...so get up off the ground & let me read that wonderful smile you have...as well, grab that bike and send it to me, I like that style...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/19/2011 |
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| Oh Tinka! So sorry to catch you at such low ebb but certainly you express here the desperation felt by many who feel they inhabit somehow the "wrong life" and that they're not where or even who they should be. The intensity, longing and sincerity of heart are palpable and it's certainly true that pain makes the pen fly... Bless you, Darlin. Bristol seems so far away now, but I still cherish deeply its fond remembrance. Refind that beautiful smile! Love always, Kate xx |
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