|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|strong emotion, heartfelt longing, tenderly expressed, lovingly conveyed|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|A poem that has the reader brought in and feels the pain of the forlorn of unrequited love.
Powerfully written, one can relate to the hurting. Prolly more bitter than sweet.
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Except for 1 s missing on caress, the story in poem form is great. The feelings of anxiety, sorrow, bewilderment and doubt are all there. I can see the tears in the eyes of the speaker, whose heart has been broken beyond repair. Something I know a little about. Where indeed gentle breeze, is your soft caress?
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Beautifully melancholy, Tinka.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|good work cuz ...|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Thank you for sharing this most heart-felt reflection!
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Your cousin is quite talented. You can fell the pain and anquish in her work.
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|That voice will be heard again.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I FEEL MUCH PAIN IN YOUR POEM TINKA.
I'VE MISSED THAT GENTLE BREEZE OF LIFE MYSELF.
WITH LOVE ..RON
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A beautifully written metaphor for lost love.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|always a wonderful write
always a pleasure to read
love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Beautiful poem, Tinka (and Deon)!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Poetry runs in your family, Mz Tinka...& Deon's write is just wonderfully sweet without being bitter...e|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I think this line should read as "never to be caressed." But I can "feel" what is expressed in this poem. I have lived this situation. Thank you for sharing, TinkaSweets. Love and best wishes,