Books by Helen J Vandepeer
winter is on the way in Canada
I start serious and end with silly.
three in one.
A try at Haiku ...and fun...
Seeping into bone
nose eyes and toes all frozen
winter chills the soul.
or this way
snow blows the wind chilling my bones
extremities freeze in the bitter chill
I long for summer still
or like this
Jilly found it very cold
when she woke today
her friends all had the piggy flu
they won't be in to play.
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|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Your haikus are fun to read.Keep up the great work.take care|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Helen, like them all and the fun of it,
especially the first one, the haiku. -gene.
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Hillarious,cute, and I know about the extremity or whatever, lost most of mine in the frost, yes like you, longing for the heat.
loved it, Blessings! Jasmin Horst