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  A Dream
by William Bonilla
Saturday, March 20, 2004
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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My Friends At A D, here I am introducing, my 11 year old Grandson
Curtis E Bonilla
who has amazed me
with this piece and his thoughts,
he loves writing poetry at school.
you can read his other work at "Just 4 Teens.com"

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4:00Am, I'm still waiting
I have
A hundred pounds on my head
Throwing up here and there
Butterflies are going wild
Inside my stomach.

Did I do The right thing
By making my wife pregnant
Well she's 22
Maybe she can handle it
Or maybe I can't handle it.

I pray, I pray
But God still does not
Answer my prayers
I feel like I got stabbed.

Poison is eating me up
Piece By piece
The doctor came out
Mister, will you follow me?
Your wife want you.

I saw her trying to smile
She had so much pain
she was unable to smile
Nor speak.

I kissed her on her forehead
Suddenly
I heard the crying of a baby
It was a boy.

We were so happy
That we lasted through the storm
Of waiting,
witnin a dream.

By: Curtis E Bonilla
3/20/04



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Reviewed by Denise Edwards 10/3/2008
my my my, he sure takes after his Granddad! Tell Curtis we look forward to more of his talented work, and to the day he graces us by joining the Den!
Reviewed by Donna Maris 3/25/2004
incredibe perspective and insight into adult themes
This is wonderful! I started when I was 16 at writing
continue to hone your skill Curtis!
- Donna
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 3/21/2004
Wow, Curtis! This is wonderful work. Continue to work on that craft - I'm sure your grandpa will help you out.
Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll 3/20/2004
Great write Curtis! thanks William.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/20/2004
That's some mature eleven year old, William. Give him my best and encourage him to keep writing. He has a good mentor - you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by jude forese 3/20/2004
11 going on 30 ;)
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 3/20/2004
very good perception for a 11 year old William, thanks for sharing this. It was a nice poetic story of life to read. G
Reviewed by Nancy D. 3/20/2004
Wow, excellent by an 11 year old. Nice of you to share this with us.

Nancy
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 3/20/2004
What a fine piece of artistry for an 11 year old!
Thanks for sharing this, William.
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 3/20/2004
I think when I was 11 I didn't much more than know what pregnancy was, much less extrapolate a fine work like this. Kudos to Curtis.
Best regards,
Leland
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/20/2004
What a fantastic write for an 11 year old..
Wow he is on his way for sure..
so full of emotions...more mature
than his years...I applaud you Curtis..
taking after grandpa I see...floria
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/20/2004
Wow!!

This is written with such depth!!

Excellent Curtis!!

Thanks for sharing William!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/20/2004
WOW he is good William..... Excellent depth indeed... brava......
Reviewed by E. Richardson 3/20/2004
mmm....seems someone is following in his grandfathers footsteps...this is very good...great depth for an 11 year old.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 3/20/2004
Gee, thanks Bill, here I was feeling pretty good today and you bring in this 11 year old to make me feel like my poetry is lousy...LOL! Damn this kid is great, where did he, at 11, get that kind of an idea to write that great little piece, you been instructing him have you? :) Keep it up Curt, you will someday be bigger than your grandpop...Peace thru the Write, Ed, Rene & Rufuz (woof)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/20/2004
Wow! William watch out for this one the name Curtis E. Bonilla will be on a book for sure! Wonderful poem, keep writing! Curtis
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/20/2004
11 years old? Very perceptive and extremely intelligent young man!
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott 3/20/2004
This is beautiful William, you definitely have an aspiring poet in your grandson...~Z~

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