|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|my my my, he sure takes after his Granddad! Tell Curtis we look forward to more of his talented work, and to the day he graces us by joining the Den!|
|Reviewed by Donna Maris
|incredibe perspective and insight into adult themes
This is wonderful! I started when I was 16 at writing
continue to hone your skill Curtis!
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Wow, Curtis! This is wonderful work. Continue to work on that craft - I'm sure your grandpa will help you out.|
|Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll
|Great write Curtis! thanks William.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|That's some mature eleven year old, William. Give him my best and encourage him to keep writing. He has a good mentor - you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|11 going on 30 ;)|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|very good perception for a 11 year old William, thanks for sharing this. It was a nice poetic story of life to read. G|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Wow, excellent by an 11 year old. Nice of you to share this with us.
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|What a fine piece of artistry for an 11 year old!
Thanks for sharing this, William.
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|I think when I was 11 I didn't much more than know what pregnancy was, much less extrapolate a fine work like this. Kudos to Curtis.
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|What a fantastic write for an 11 year old..
Wow he is on his way for sure..
so full of emotions...more mature
than his years...I applaud you Curtis..
taking after grandpa I see...floria
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
This is written with such depth!!
Thanks for sharing William!!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|WOW he is good William..... Excellent depth indeed... brava......|
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|mmm....seems someone is following in his grandfathers footsteps...this is very good...great depth for an 11 year old.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Gee, thanks Bill, here I was feeling pretty good today and you bring in this 11 year old to make me feel like my poetry is lousy...LOL! Damn this kid is great, where did he, at 11, get that kind of an idea to write that great little piece, you been instructing him have you? :) Keep it up Curt, you will someday be bigger than your grandpop...Peace thru the Write, Ed, Rene & Rufuz (woof)|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wow! William watch out for this one the name Curtis E. Bonilla will be on a book for sure! Wonderful poem, keep writing! Curtis|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|11 years old? Very perceptive and extremely intelligent young man!|
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|This is beautiful William, you definitely have an aspiring poet in your grandson...~Z~|