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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/13/2004 |
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| lost opportunity echoes in our minds ... |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
7/12/2004 |
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Augh!!!
So sad.
A love unconditioned plagues the memory forever.
Great way to put it!!
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
7/12/2004 |
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| Mystery and intrigue! Agony over lost opportunity? Well done, William! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/12/2004 |
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| He who hesitates is lost! However, I also believe that sometimes a check in the spirit works to our benefit! Wonderful poem William! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
7/12/2004 |
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| So bittersweet, beautiful write, William. |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
7/12/2004 |
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Wow...this touched me.
I often wonder at the chances we miss when we could have gotten to know someone and didn't. This poem says it all, my friend. A keeper!
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/12/2004 |
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| A beautiful write, Bill, as always, although the last line in the third paragraph I might change to "Would you have stayed?", but then again there is such a thing as poetic license...Peace always, Ed & rufuz |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
7/12/2004 |
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| Interesting when things like this happen, and often food for thought. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/12/2004 |
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Twice as good.......lol!!
Love Tinka :) |
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