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  A Comparison
by William Bonilla
Monday, January 31, 2005
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Old home, New home
North, South
Cramped, spacious
Snow storm, Rain storm
High Fever, Yellow fever
Apparition, Hope not too soon
Beautiful Park, Lovely Swamp
Pet Selection, Alligator Bait
Eat you pets, without any hate
Frost bite,
Snake Bite, Spider Bite
God knows, what mites
Kitchen burn, Sun burn
Dreaming, Swimming
Lonely Widow, Black Widow
Vicious, poisonous
Hampton Beach, South Beach
Great Adventure, Disney World
Bellevue Hospital, Space Center
Mantan, or a real tan
What to ware, who really cares
Pot holes, Sink holes
And everywhere an ass hole
Deep, Deeper
Multiple orgasms,
Multiple Head aches
Tired, Retired and relaxing.

By: William Bonilla
1/27/05








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Reviewed by Lori Moore
Nice write, William.
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
LOL
CAN'T WIN
CAN'T LOSE
LOVE IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!!
"everywhere assholes"
LOL!!!!
Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
poetic prose.....
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Yes this is but I prefer that no alligator eat my pet. That is why I stay in Virginnny.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Most interesting read William!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Nila Jamier
I can see your covering all aspects this is well done enjoy its time too!
Reviewed by Sue Hess
this is great, I'll take the multiple orgasms, given my choice of course
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Wow! now that is what I call crafty comparisons!
William you either have it made or you haven't
your choice;-) lol

eileen
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Here a hampton is a boys play thing.

Cheer up buddy, don't let life get yer down, as monty python said, in life of brian..
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
William, this is a little different write for you...are you trying to say there is no perfect place to live? hee,hee....as always a delightful write with your own unique touch....good job, friend
Peace and love, Carole
Reviewed by Paul Williams
hahaha lol... love it, 'everywhere an ass hole', never a truer word spoken. lol

Paul;-}
Reviewed by Janet Parker
This is just great! I really like the rhythm. I think you could have this recorded as a rap song. Very inventive.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Intriguing write, different!
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Just as Nordette said and I think on top of that you need get yourself back to the hot weather down south, the cold is affecting you in ways you canot see...Ed
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Pot holes, Sink holes
And everywhere an ass hole

Priceless! LOL
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