|Reviewed by June Thompson
|neither do I.. as I say this all the time. I dont want to be another cliche, a statistic, a norm, a typical .....
this was so much needed to be read
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|touching William, happy 4th July. Thought about you and others as I wrote, "Dying for Country."|
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Superb write William and far from being cliche.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A soul-gripping, realistic look at the inevitable, William. Very powerful. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Such a profound and powerful write William, a hard one to think about. As always a wonderful offering!
Peace and love, Carole
|Reviewed by jude forese
|powerful glimpse of death's reality ... we can only be cliche if we allow ourselves to be ...|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah William, this is so very poignant. you will never be a cliche!
|Reviewed by Mark Mahoney
|Very powerfull write this William and done with great grace and style, well done...Mark|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This is one very touchy read...and yes I agree I would also like to die piecefully...quick..no pain no suffering...and then be cremated and my ashes scattered to the sea!! There must me NOTHING left behind...no urn...for no one to be reminded I was there once!!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|You write as well dead as you did alive...or is that a cliche too...? Ed|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|William you pack a hard wallop!No kids play in this excellent poem!
You'll never be a cliche! Blessings to you!
|Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
|At least YOU will never be a cliche. You are an original!|
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|Expresses a reality at death. Excellent write. R|