|Reviewed by Cathy Delaleu
|I enjoyed this very much, it was sweet and wonderful for it keeps the reader wanting more|
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|This is such a wonderful poem. It really brings so much to life and the treasures of each day. Amazing how something we do everyday one day bothers us and wakes us up to the treasures of today.
Fantastic and loving awakening poem.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|It's so real it hurts, William. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|when push comes to shove, we really are all alone in this existence... wonderful capture, William! now go heat up that bowl of soup and enjoy!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Like no other, you really do hit the parts we can not...
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
So poignant...so delicate...so private a moment...softly captured through your words. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A perfect tender moment William, written with love...
Peace and love, Carole
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so lovely William, very beautiful!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Okay this brought tears to my eyes...this is so tender...but bleeds at the same time!!
Hope you know what I mean!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A truly powerful 'slice of life,' piece, William.|
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|Ooh William, this is such a beautiful write! Excellent passionate write! I love how you wrote on appreciation and acknowledgement for your loved one, using a simple deed.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|So poignant William, wanting the closeness of another body, food can always wait. Excellent poem!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I am sure as well another tear did find its way out of her eyes too...another pretty one, Bill...Ed|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|All from a bowl of soup. sometimes the simplest or oddest things can trigger tears. A moment of fear but thankful that there's someone that you love and trust is there.
Very soft and emotional write.
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Such bittersweetness flows from your verses, William.