|Reviewed by Shoma Mittra
|Poignant. You have a gift for poetry, william.|
|Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
|Damn..that was done very well and you shot me through the heart!|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Sad, that so many get to
Well written William...
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|An extremely poignant tale William, but written with the masters hand...
love and peace, Carole
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|An extremely sad tale, William.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Thanks. After reading a poem on AD yesterday I felt angry at him finding this type of thing funny. I would say there for the grace..
But no. Cos I was there in 2000 thru 2001.
All I had were the clothes on my back and a little bible..
Said so well....
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Chilling and heart-breaking poetry, so very raw and real, such dispair so eloquently expressed.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
What more can I say....I guess life has to end that way for many soon the way life is treating us!!
Thanks for sharing !!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|oh my William such a sad poem, but written with your expertise. I know it's just a poem, right!
Love and peace
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This is a well-written and frightening poem William, and I certainly hope that it is not autobiographic. It does seem that when we are caught in a downward trend that there is little we can do to stop the spin. Of course, that is never true since God never gives us problems that he knows we cannot learn from and work through.