|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Many writers search for what you have . Well said......M|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|The last few lines did it for me...got to take note!!
With the awaiting verses
Soaking in the sensuousness
Of purified thoughts
Dwelling in my heart and soul
Guarded by a burning flame
Standing like a sentry
Between True love
And a scarred Heart. "
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Your poetic flame burns very bright, D'Artagnan.|
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|This is breathtaking William!|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Another romantic offering in your own unique style...wonderful,
love and peace, Carole
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Reviewed by George Thompson
|I enjoyed this. A very good read.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|THIS is exceptional..you have become a poet of another genre..wow!
|Reviewed by J M
|William a wonderful poem so full of beautiful thoughts I always use divine as in reference to God- Jesus.... _ Holy Spirit. This was beautiful work once more. Stumped me on the thoughts too.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Enjoyed this write William, it has a soft and sensual feeling...it also has a romantic touch, you've penned it well my friend. Simply lovely.
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|I have at AD met the word "divine" several times and cannot yet distinguish if it is a reference to God or simply a substitute to wonderful or great. I usually use it to refer to God only. If that's what you mean I would understand the purified thoughts. But who can tell? Victor|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|You just get better and better..
|Reviewed by Michael Mathieu
|Protect what you already have,Put the guard on light duty,
Excellent write William.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Shoot the sentry, and never never never sedentry..|
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|This is very nice, William -- heartfelt thoughts from the heart (scared), yearning for love. Very nice, indeed. You have a romantic soul, sweet poet.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|conceptually intruiging poetry, William ... get your point across quite effectively ...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Another exceptional write William.|