|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Your poem says what I feel and touches my heart. We will all travel that road someday. I'm sure you have given your loved ones many memories to last forever.......M|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|without leaving behind memories to those we love it is as though we weren't alive ... i'm sure you'll leave a bountiful of smiles ...
excellent pen, William ...
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I'm sure they will always remember
you grandpa, and look at all the
writings you will leave them..
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Poignant and powerful. When your time actually arrives, your grandsons will be blessed by it.
My father wrote poetry...my grandson - his first-born greatgrandson - was one of us who spoke at his funeral.
It takes a great deal of love to write like this ...and you surely have a beautiful love-filled heart!
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|Well now, I look at dying like going on a new adventure. Something I don't get to do now. When we die the past is gone. The bills, the appointments, the sad exchanges and not so fond memories. I believe it's...just love. Great poem William.|
|Reviewed by J M
|This one is powerful William the ending was sad.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|We all leave this mortal coil, so we gotta make everday count..|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This is a sad reality we all have to face someday...thanks for sharing your dream William!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wow! William this is so expertly written that I could not find it sad to read. It's just too beautifully done! Bravo!A Keeper!|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Wonderful write William...I have very fond memories of my maternal grandfather, didn't really get to know my paternal grandfather...I'm sure your grandson's will have a beautiful and warm picture of their grandfather forever etched in their hearts...enjoyed.
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|I never knew either of my Grandfather's, but I'd have to say if I had got to choose one, he'd a been a fun loving guy like you!!|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|William, don't you know cool grandpa's never fade away...they always live in memory lane...
love and peace, Carole
|Reviewed by Michael Mathieu
|Great write William, I'm sure your grandson's will always remember their cool granpa,You might out live them,,
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|SAd ,but they will never forget you ..Your a great person I feel that.Stay safe and well..Hugsssssssssssss|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Where are you gonna find me?
There in your heart
They surely will, Grandpa Bill. My Grandpa still lives there.
|Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines
|Ha! "Filed under cool grandpa" -- I love it, Bill!
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Grandpa Bill, it is a wonder a bucket wasn't the designate ball in the Miami Superball, because I been hearing for years about this-one or that-one kicking the bucket.
It is the same one Truman referred to? (if you are old enough to remember the clichè)
Anyway, well done look at the reaper, he is coming like you or not.
|Reviewed by George Thompson
|Sad in a way, William, but so true. You've penned a good one.