|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
"A Re- Visit And A Sad Coo"
Oh these are sweet words William.
I just love watching birds they seem so inquisitive.
Futhermore, they surely do seem self sufficient and reliable too!
Once they find a special little place they will frequent time and time again.
Enjoyed your personification of the little visitor.
All the best wishing you abundance
((( Semper Fi )))
From the Heart...
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|This is lovely, William. I have several mourning doves who come to our ground feeder every day. They're so pretty and from what I've read, they mate for life. I loved hearing that. A charming write.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A beautiful melancholy nature piece, William...
love and peace, Carole ~
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|As long as the re-visit of the coo-coo doesn't result in a fly-over deposit of "fine feather'd fertilizer" while you were tending garden, I'm sure you and "Old Gal" will spend lots of springs and summers enjoying each others company. (smile)
blessin's, this is nice to read after doing taxes, thanks Bro. Wm,
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara
|What a sad heartfelt piece, yet within a note of perhaps opportunity!? Old friends can again be new friends! I like the way you set about this (if I am not reaading more into it than I should), and if I am then it is indeed a lovely gem just the same! Glad to see and read your wor again!
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|My suggestion is to invite here over for a
Drink and maybe she will coo and cook!
Opportunity is knocking your door!
Excellent write a little sad but
Great imagery and topic of this poem
Love And Peace to You Always
Your Friend....Morning Star
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Such soul-stirring sentiments, William. Nicely done. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Least she can have the whole bed, not just a tiny bit on the edge..|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh What a vivid picture you painted with your gifted quill!!
Thanks for sharing this beautiful yet bittersweet offering!!
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|Beautiful. Could see her looking down at you and sighing. Just beautful.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You do nature, and life, extremely well, William. And those mournful coos can be quite powerful.|
|Reviewed by Miss Pandora
|Touching write William with tender caring threaded through. Enjoyed this, Panda :)|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|It was really a dove...or you just don't want the missus to know?
What you meant with the watering-my-garden's-beauties Symbolism?
You are centainly a slippery one.
Then again....I like the poem very much.
|Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd
|Realistic write from the heart,enjoyed much!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent poem on the topic William, but sad too...
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|Such is life for those too afraid to wander out of their comfort zones...and still...a year could go by and they haven't changed a bit!
Sad but oh so true...lonely coo...coo-coo?
I like this even though its sad...you expressed it so creatively William~
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Such a beautiful and heartfelt write my friend, but such a sad one! This reminds me of the cooing doves that I hear early in the mornings here on my farm...their beautiful animals and give one an overwhelming sense of peace, yet a lonesome feeling...enjoyed this write very much...always a pleasure to stop by and read your work!
|Reviewed by email@example.com Bennett
|This is life for us sometimes.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my, so sad...But well done dear man...HUGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS|
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|Reminds me of the moaning doves I use to hear in Jordan on a fine spring morning. Beautiful|
|Reviewed by J M
|This one seems so sad William well done... Expressing this poem...
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Invite her in, offer her a drink, maybe she will coo for you...;) Ed|