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| Reviewed by J M |
4/18/2007 |
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William you are such a romantic and gentle writer. This is beautiful as always..................
Peace,
JOSIE |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/17/2007 |
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| I was fortunate to marry my first love and what a blessing she was to me. I thank God every day that I had her, she made my life complete. |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
4/16/2007 |
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| Superb free verse William. |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
4/16/2007 |
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You did a wonderful job writing this -- so wistful, so romantic, so lovely.
Love,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/16/2007 |
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A bittersweet offering William!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
4/16/2007 |
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"A Thousand Miles Away"
Oh William this is so beautiful!
Reminds me of one of my poems I wrote of my first love
Still love him to this day and always will, we both feel that same way.
Although we are on in years now...we still just a few years ago were
able to speak about our wonderful appreciation for one another and the love we will always possess.
The "FIRST LOVE" they say...sometimes I wonder if that kind of love for people is the only true love...hmmm I have wondered.
Therefore, I never discount the love of the young ones...we all knew how we felt and most still never forget henceforth the young one's nowadays perhaps may feel that very same way.
A most heavenly love...a love that causes you to feel that you are in the same family ...perhaps it turns spiritual that is a possibility!
All the best and many blessings to you always,
Hugs and ((( SEMPER FI )))~Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
4/16/2007 |
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| Just beautiful...Hugsssssssssssss |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/16/2007 |
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| Dreams can truly be wondrous magic carpet rides through time, and yours sounds marvelous, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
4/16/2007 |
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| Dreams are precious, priceless, like those who inspire them. This is incredibly beautiful William. |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
4/16/2007 |
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| The power of a first love should be this. It isn't always a great memory. This is bittersweet but still lives because the memory brings a smile. Nicely done! |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
4/16/2007 |
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Oh the first one........no lies just hope, no sorrows just smiles,
no suspicions just unlimited faith, puppy love, innocent, worth to be put in a gold lock where reality can't touch.
Thanks for the memories.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/16/2007 |
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| Funny though, the girl of my school dreams, I saw not long ago, now she'd only be in my nightmares... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/15/2007 |
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A poignant,but most beautifully written remembrance of a first
love. Splendid poem William!
Eileen |
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