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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
5/12/2008 |
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| Exercise is good for you and early morning is a time to be just glad you are alive and going outside wakes you up. I don't walk no more, cause legs and back hurt too much, but used to go out and around my rose garden years ago first thing when I woke up. It was a joyous time for reflections about what my day was going to be. |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
5/19/2007 |
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| I agree with Andy on this...great piece on observations while strolling along. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
5/19/2007 |
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| Walking and observation, has made a perfect penn.. |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
5/19/2007 |
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I love to walk in the early morning
It just makes my day
And theirs so many different sounds in the air
Just love it,I don't have a
Golden retriever so I walk with my husband
Enjoyed this poetic thoughts very Much!!
Love and Peace to you always
Your friend...Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
5/18/2007 |
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Nothing like that fresh morning dew on the face...with a beautiful and glorious day ahead...enjoy and be blessed!
Sincerely,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
((( SEMPER FI )))
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
5/18/2007 |
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Many of those characters haven't applied
their makeup yet, reckon..
Always enjoy your writes...
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/17/2007 |
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I enjoyed the walk with you!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/17/2007 |
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Shows how very much we are alike;-) Enjoyed this one mucho, William!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/17/2007 |
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That Champ
Our Golden Retriver
What a character
He is.
I'd say so, and a marvelous Slice of Life Poem, William! |
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
5/17/2007 |
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I like your metaphors in this poem and how you expressed the "plight" of those who need a newspaper in the "reading room."
George |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/17/2007 |
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| Great pen,enjoyed..stay well and safe dear man....Hugss |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
5/17/2007 |
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| Boy William, you just described my mornings! I am out walking my oldest Rottie at 4:50 every morning. It amazes me everyday the sights and daily rituals of nature. My favorite time of day! Great piece. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
5/17/2007 |
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What a character you are my friend! Enjoyed this greatly, I don't think I would have put the two together, but you are right! Loved this clever and well written poem, I too love morning walks, can't wait summer break when time is not as much of an essence and I can again resume my morning walks around the farm! Next time I see Boomer my little terrior performing her morning ritual I will think of this wonderful write! Always a pleasure to stop by and read your work my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/16/2007 |
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When we see a Golden Retriever puppy on TV my wife goes all maternal.
I don't know, as a ex owner of dogs, who has the most pleasure of those morning's walks, my self or the dog.
Thank you very much for sharing.
Georg |
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