|Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk
Your broken heart
Is the prize
For the champion to mend."
Beautiful words and flow was great, I enjoyed reading...Hugs, Peggy
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL ! There is such eloquence in this tender romantic poem...........M|
|Reviewed by J M
|Tender and well written the beauty of emotions stand out in this one.... William beautiful.
|Reviewed by Barbara Mercer
|Beautiful, voluptuous expression William. Waves of love }}}}}} Barbara|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Par excellent William...|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my,I love this so very beautiful william,Hugssssssssssss|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Wow a heart to mend a beautifully written poem
Your choice of words have painted a picture
Of deep feelings of regret and longing to mend a
Broken heart and surrounded with your love
Powerful page is filled with emotions passion and yearnings
The soft tender tone and words provide
With excellent Imagery and flow!!
Love Peace and Happiness to you...Morning Star
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Bill, just go tell her, grab her and marry her.....|
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|William, this poem twisted me around its words immediately...its a beautiful romantic & alluring poem. I truly enjoyed this.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|WOW! I love the way you wrote this one William, with such panache and a sense of the old romantic derring-do! bravo!;-)
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Oh my! What a beautiful and sensuous offering my friend...such a longing and desire burning within the lines of this beautiful write...outstanding!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|SUch a yearning yet bittersweet offering William!!
Thanks for sharing this touching beauty!!