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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/6/2007 |
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Most beautiful bittersweet offering yes!!
love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
7/6/2007 |
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| This cuts so deep William. Beautiful and bittersweet poem. |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
7/6/2007 |
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| I can see all of this happening in this heart rendering write. Thankyou for sharing !........M |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
7/5/2007 |
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An excellent compelling write
Heartfelt tribute to all our soldiers
Your words captured a sadness that we all share
One that pulls the heart!
Outstanding piece!!
Love Peace and Joy to you always...Yolie |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
7/5/2007 |
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| William, you've captured a painting here of sadness & honor to a fallen hero. He gave his life for America. So many of our young men and women are losing their lives and when we see them being returned to our Country...it's heart rendering and we wonder will this terrible war ever be over. This is certainly a tribute to those who have lost their lives and your voice illustrates the sadness of the moment. A great write! |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
7/5/2007 |
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| Your pride and sorrow drape these words as the American Flag drapes our lost. Hold your high after the tears my friend. You are all appreciated. A beautifully penned piece William. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
7/5/2007 |
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Oh brother, you too felt the pain as you are bracing yourself for more to come as the politicians shrug their shoulders saying that "that's the way of the soldier"
This poem should be placed on a black stone at the top of Congree main stairs so they can remember before sending one more of our young brothers to harms way.
Semper Fi
Georg |
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| Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk |
7/4/2007 |
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Awesome tribute for Our Countries "Hero"/Hero's, cried all the way through the read...(son is in Baghdad) thanks for writing this for
our Men and Women William...GB, Love and Hugs, Peggy |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/4/2007 |
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| fine tribute, William ... |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
7/4/2007 |
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| Excellent writing as always sweet man...Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
7/4/2007 |
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You bring it all home with this excellent 4th of July tribute, William. Without their sacrifices, we would not know or live in freedom. Freedom is the most expensive thing any of us will ever know and it is never more than a generation away from extinction.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/4/2007 |
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Splendid tribute poem William! Enhances the meaning of the sacrifices made for our independence and reminds us to be thankful for still being free!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
7/4/2007 |
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A heartfelt write William
And I agree with Rhonda.... |
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| Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia |
7/4/2007 |
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Dearest William,
EVERY American should read "Riding On The Caisson"...then bow before Almighty God, and give thanks for the price OTHERS have paid.
A work of EXCELLENCE, William. I salute you, too.
Love&Hugs, Rhonda |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
7/4/2007 |
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A very touching write my friend...expressed well indeed! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
7/4/2007 |
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wonderful write,
peace always,
dan |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
7/4/2007 |
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| Heroes all, protecting the world against fanatics whose god spells murder. Great poem. |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
7/4/2007 |
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In todays parade in Temple Terrace Florida, pictures of the lost sons dressed down the trucks and floats. It was a different approach to family loss that moved me. We don't realize loss when we read it so often in the papers but seeing the pained faces of family members put me there in their hearts.
Thank you!
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader) |
7/4/2007 |
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| A most heart touching poem, William ... Have a safe and happy 4th ... |
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