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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/14/2007 |
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| The imagery is great ,feelings blend with the portrayal of thought and happenstance!........M |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/13/2007 |
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Well written...heartfelt offering ....be safe!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
9/12/2007 |
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"... finger protruding of bright orange hues..." could be God is reminding/admonishing us begin to dwell on what we have, rather than what we had. To Him we need to give thanks and praise.
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
9/12/2007 |
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The only think we can do is pray
Its almost imposable not think about this
Tragedy and all the pain tears of that moment when
Many hearts skipped a beat!
Beautifully written Ode
Love Peace and hugssss to you my friend....Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
9/12/2007 |
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| It's difficult not to think of it today William, blessing, Holly |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
9/12/2007 |
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William,
I have been trying to not think about 9/11, but it was too difficult. I had sadness surrounding me all day yesterday. I believe that we MUST move on from this..we must celebrate life, and live in this world of uncertainty and try to make it a better place to live. Loving, healing, and helping others to our best ability, from this day forward!
Peace, Love, and Light, my dear, dear, friend,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
9/12/2007 |
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Well done William...a moment when the heart...miss a beat...and yet again...pump...with fluidity of emotion to fill your pen.
John |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
9/12/2007 |
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| William, too many have survived close callsand I have to agree with Susan, God does check in on us. Thank you for sharing your words with us. Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
9/12/2007 |
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Your two minute call was your heart attack and God does check in on all of us . remembering 9/11 brings us all back to reality.
Love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/12/2007 |
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William,
I felt this grip my heart, as well. Powerful...powerful...yes.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
9/12/2007 |
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I had a moment, a long one of rage and I wrote what George Carrol said from one in a very dark mode.
I am fed up that we got so many memorials and too little celebrations.
Perhaps, we need to take a sabatical and stop trying so hard to teach how to swim to a drowned man.
With you brother, all the way.
Georg |
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