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Blood Moon
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Welcome to the darkest chambers
Of my mind , where noting seems
To be What you image
For you
A bright beautiful full moon
Seems romantic
Under it’s silvery beams you dream.
Of one gently engulfing you
Within his warm passionate embrace
Tasting his kisses, sweeter then life
As he takes you where, you’ve never been
Into ecstasies, you’ve only dreamed.
In the other hand, I fear the night
When the wolfs-bane blooms
Under the silvery beams of the bright
Full moon
Even a man who says his prayers
Can prowl and howl like the beast
That walks upright.
I can sense prey approaching
Before it appears before me
She is lost, injured and bleeding
In the wilderness, of the forest
Of my domain,
I am able to visualize, her fear
In the night
As blood rushes through her veins
The scent of fear is near
I crave the tenderness of her flesh.
My fangs drip with the saliva
Of the hungry beast within
I pounce upon her, from ambush
She never felt the pain of dying
As I sank my fangs, deep into her throat
It was over before it began.
In the morning after
Hunters discover, the carcass of a doe
Throat ripped apart
Eyes rolled to the back of her head
Which once encased her brains
Now cracked opened, like a soft boiled egg.
Within my room I woke
Sun caressing my face, blood shot eyes
Opening to the pain of light
Bloody wolf’s paw prints leading
From the opened bay window
To the foot of my bed.
By William Bonilla
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr!
10/16/07
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
10/23/2007 |
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A "wonderful" halloween tale. But, did it have to have a Bambi ending?
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
10/22/2007 |
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| Well welcome to the party Mr. Wonderful. This is a horrific write, in a good way! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/20/2007 |
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WOW! William, this is a fantastic halloween thriller that makes the spine shiver and thoughts get all spooky! Bravo!
ET |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
10/20/2007 |
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uhhhh, my dear, into the dark you send us, very skillfully done!
Gina |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
10/20/2007 |
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Wow! Dark and forboding...and a damn good write.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) |
10/20/2007 |
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| Et tu? Great write William but I'm scared of you and Georg and Halloween, and the moon, and wolves, and pumpkins too..Luv'dit! PLB&G. <Mikii> |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/20/2007 |
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You tell quite the tail, William: excellent! If I have nightmares tonght, I'm blamin' yew. Great job!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *shivers* |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
10/20/2007 |
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Wow, what an exciting write my friend, you've captured many emotions within the lines of this one! Well done, I don't know if I'll sleep as peacefully tonight, but great write!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
10/20/2007 |
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I really enjoyed the way you took the moon from a romantic object, and made me look over my shoulder....very good job Wm.
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
10/20/2007 |
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...spooky-licious, William!
love and peace, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
10/20/2007 |
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| Wowwwwwww,great pen,have a wonderful day sweet man...Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/20/2007 |
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| Shades of Lon Chaney, Jr.! You best chain yourself to that bed, my friend, especially this time of year. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
10/20/2007 |
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Wow William, I am so glad I read your wirds this morning and not before bedtime as I would still be trying to rest. A great write that sure takes one away. Thanks for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/20/2007 |
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Hey! Werewolf eating maidens, have you been on Jersey Ed "tasting" some of his greenery?
But continue doing that my friend, it scareds the panties out of the ladies and give more fun to other Werewolves.
Hooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
10/20/2007 |
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This is from my passion partner in crime? Wow, you are multi dimensional. Very amazing imagery, William, You had my mind working overtime... I posted Eternal Embrace, check it out, we are really steaming up the den with this one.....
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
10/19/2007 |
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| Scary William. Very scary... |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
10/19/2007 |
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Oh I'm not sure I'll be sleeping after reading this. You give us mystery and then put the pain into our very being.
Awesome.
Love,
Susan |
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