|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Loneliness right now, but you have the pen to write about it and time will heal and maybe bring someone new into your life again. Memories will linger and hold on to the good and let go of the bad.|
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|A soulful touching poem of lost love. Its not the same once they are gone , and it never will be..........M|
|Reviewed by Mary Coe
|Beautiful and touching.|
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
"It's Not The Same" intimately sweet filled with soft longing whispers of love.
It is good when we can erupt and birth befitting words for emotional occassions. Semper fi all the way continued blessings everyday.
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|William, this is so touching & written in a true reality of knowing things will never be the same...sad. Such a heart rendering write my friend.|
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|the yen of life...as it use to be
. . .knowing though, it can't ever be,
longing, longing...remembering, delving
into the days of yore, I want to see...
You bring out the best in she...
but, live on...live on...
Wow! Where did that come from? :)
A heartfelt tip on that pen of yours...a tip that all should heed! Never forget what is a part of you, always
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|...endings always leave empty spaces, and in the beginning you keep running into them...but life does go on, and you owe it to yourself to keep moving forward dear friend...
a gentle and touching poem William.
love and peace, Carole~
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Fine poem William..|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Beautiful yearning poem of love,William!
You always capture the essence William!
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|smooth as pretty womans behind or is that a fat babies behind, anyway this holds a lot water William, water that some day may burst into tears when our loves leave us or whatever,|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|sad and so full of longing well expressed|
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|An awsomely written, romantic poem of loss and longing, D'Artagnan! Just keep remembering that time heals all wounds.
|Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
|well written about your feelings of missing the presence of another.|
|Reviewed by Charlie
|It's kind of haunting-- this epiphany. The echoing of the refrain really works well. --Charlie|
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...one of your more beautiful writes William...simply missing...one.
very well done...
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|At least you can have all the bed, and go out whenever it takes your fancy... we're a weird bunch, those in relationships oft wish they were free, then once free want to be caged again.. we sure are daft...|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
This is so tenderly written..You should go visit her..stop being so lonely..get on a plane and go see her..
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Someday soon all will be back to be the same..even better!!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|May it be the same very soon William,,, Longing poem.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Powerfully penned sadness, William; excellent!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Buy a smaller sofa and it will be more easy to fill.
If that doesn't help...if you shave they will come.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
This one effectively penned sadness - no, it's not the same.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|D'Artagnan, you are a true Romantic. And I hope that sofa of yours fills up soon.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Very touching sweetie,please have a wonderful day...Hugssssss|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|A heart touching poem William|